Splendor
Life is all about love.96 total reviews
Comment from IndianaIrish
A great entry into the 55-word contest, Bob. You created a complete story with a beginning, middle, and ending. Many of the entries didn't manage to get a complete story conveyed. Best wishes!
Smiles,
Irish : )
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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A great entry into the 55-word contest, Bob. You created a complete story with a beginning, middle, and ending. Many of the entries didn't manage to get a complete story conveyed. Best wishes!
Smiles,
Irish : )
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much, Irish. I appreciate this so much. Bob
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good writing here, your words tell a super message about two people in love how in the end it was I do. Pretty picture to go along always makes it better. Great story in a few words. Great writing is always.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Very good writing here, your words tell a super message about two people in love how in the end it was I do. Pretty picture to go along always makes it better. Great story in a few words. Great writing is always.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you, GW...I do sincerely appreciate your review. Bob
Comment from forestport12
Could this be about your true life romance? I won't tell. Such emotion brought to the surface with so few words to build emotion. Yet you pulled it off. Most of these contest entries won't even try this genre. But you pulled it off my friend. Powerful.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Could this be about your true life romance? I won't tell. Such emotion brought to the surface with so few words to build emotion. Yet you pulled it off. Most of these contest entries won't even try this genre. But you pulled it off my friend. Powerful.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much,Stan. You made my day. Truly. Bob
Comment from vkmack
How lovely and sweet! This is, indeed, a true love story. The language is beautiful without being flowering, but it is colorful and descriptive. You worked a lot into such little space! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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How lovely and sweet! This is, indeed, a true love story. The language is beautiful without being flowering, but it is colorful and descriptive. You worked a lot into such little space! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Awww. Thanks so much, VK. (name please) LOL...Welcome aboard Fanstory! I know you will like it here. I have been here since 2004. I will keep an eye out for your work as well to review. Bob (Mastery)
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Hi Bob. Well, my name is Vista. I'll give you a minute. Yeah, it's Vista. I was born in 1961 when nothing else was called that except VistaVision, which is where my little country Mama found it. Truth is stranger than fiction.
Thanks so much for the welcome. People have been so nice, and I'm thrilled to be part of the community. Thanks for keeping track of me, and I will return the favor.
Gratefully,
Vista Kay (VK)
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Good Luck :) Bob
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Ah, one finds love that springs eternal from within the human breast. A spring time affair where lust courses through the veins, then warmed to the boiling point by summer sun usually fades away in the fall. But it did not and the love story ends on a joyous note when "Brad said, "I do." (55 words)
Regards:
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Ah, one finds love that springs eternal from within the human breast. A spring time affair where lust courses through the veins, then warmed to the boiling point by summer sun usually fades away in the fall. But it did not and the love story ends on a joyous note when "Brad said, "I do." (55 words)
Regards:
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Steve. I appreciate your fine in-depth review. Bob
Comment from juliaSjames
Love the subtle way you make an ordinary love story extraordinary in 55 words by reversing the expected. A confirmed bachelor is won over by his confident lover. A spring meeting leads to an autumn wedding.
It's as though nature is an active matchmaker.
Nicely done.
I wonder if the rising sap of spring produces a "sense of serenity"? I'm thinking more along the lines of a "sparkle of vitality". LOL
Best of luck in the contest, Bob. You made every word count.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Love the subtle way you make an ordinary love story extraordinary in 55 words by reversing the expected. A confirmed bachelor is won over by his confident lover. A spring meeting leads to an autumn wedding.
It's as though nature is an active matchmaker.
Nicely done.
I wonder if the rising sap of spring produces a "sense of serenity"? I'm thinking more along the lines of a "sparkle of vitality". LOL
Best of luck in the contest, Bob. You made every word count.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Ahhh! Thanks so much, Julia. I do so appreciate you. Bob
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Hi Bob I like this little piece, and it's well written. The descriptive script was easy to follow and I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Mary
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hi Bob I like this little piece, and it's well written. The descriptive script was easy to follow and I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Mary
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hi, Mary. Thankyou for taking the time and the nice review. Bob
Comment from Righteous Riter
The is a love story. The writer does a god job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. The emotion of the writer is felt as this piece speaks to my heart the words wedding bells.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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The is a love story. The writer does a god job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. The emotion of the writer is felt as this piece speaks to my heart the words wedding bells.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thanks, RR. I appreciate your time and review. Bob
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Ahhhh..Long live love! What a romantic little story, Mastery- had to jump up to the top to see if it was true! LOL You paint a lovely picture for the reader and that's what it's all about. Good job! Thanks for sharing! Betty
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Ahhhh..Long live love! What a romantic little story, Mastery- had to jump up to the top to see if it was true! LOL You paint a lovely picture for the reader and that's what it's all about. Good job! Thanks for sharing! Betty
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Hi, Betty. Thankyou so much for your encouraging words. Bless you! Bob
Comment from Curt Mongold
A wonderful expression of love in the seasonal flow of time. The budding love and the budding trees both matured into the ripeness of the harvest, a bounty of both kinds expressed in a very romantic way.
Curt
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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A wonderful expression of love in the seasonal flow of time. The budding love and the budding trees both matured into the ripeness of the harvest, a bounty of both kinds expressed in a very romantic way.
Curt
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Hi, Curt. Seemslike forever since I've seen you around. LOL..Thanks so much for your kind words. Bob
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It has been awhile Bob, but I am glad I was here for that gem you penned.