Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Very.....very good! This was right down to the nitty-gritty. I like this. On of the best of all time for me that I have read!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Very.....very good! This was right down to the nitty-gritty. I like this. On of the best of all time for me that I have read!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
hello there~!
Wow! Now this amazing piece of work has me thinking. Really. You have asked a very meaningful question on which, I think, I'll be pondering the entire evening.
Thanks for sharing~
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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hello there~!
Wow! Now this amazing piece of work has me thinking. Really. You have asked a very meaningful question on which, I think, I'll be pondering the entire evening.
Thanks for sharing~
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thanks
Comment from Martin Chan
"One Can Say" is a wonderful short writing in just four lines, and yet it delivers a whole big story. A very nice piece of work that is well presented and has a strong theme that I like it.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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"One Can Say" is a wonderful short writing in just four lines, and yet it delivers a whole big story. A very nice piece of work that is well presented and has a strong theme that I like it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Janet Foor
Wow! What a great philosophy. I assume the lack of respect and pride in and for our ancestors is one of the reasons why history repeats itself over and over. Well done deep water.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Wow! What a great philosophy. I assume the lack of respect and pride in and for our ancestors is one of the reasons why history repeats itself over and over. Well done deep water.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thank you again
Comment from Acquired Taste
Stunning artwork. I must admit, I was happier before I knew about my ancestors and feel badly would my descendents remotely investigate my place on this planet.
Nonetheless, a thought-provoking offering. AT=/
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Stunning artwork. I must admit, I was happier before I knew about my ancestors and feel badly would my descendents remotely investigate my place on this planet.
Nonetheless, a thought-provoking offering. AT=/
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thank you for reading
Comment from Kingsrookviii
The more I read this the better it seems. My initial thoughts were that the two were mutually exclusive, but they aren't in the sense that what we teach by example is most likely to continue with future generations. Of course, then many factors come into play like changes values or simply interest beyond the here and now which so occupies the young minds these days of information over-load. Great poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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The more I read this the better it seems. My initial thoughts were that the two were mutually exclusive, but they aren't in the sense that what we teach by example is most likely to continue with future generations. Of course, then many factors come into play like changes values or simply interest beyond the here and now which so occupies the young minds these days of information over-load. Great poem.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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again thank you for this
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, that's depressing, Deepwater. I was kind of counting on some one of my descendants remembering me. But your poem does lay the dilemma out there. Not all one's ancestors are worthy of being remembered.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Well, that's depressing, Deepwater. I was kind of counting on some one of my descendants remembering me. But your poem does lay the dilemma out there. Not all one's ancestors are worthy of being remembered.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Jay its up to us to be remembered for who we are that is the best we can receive
Gary
Comment from humpwhistle
I don't know, my friend. No pride in the achievements of our ancestors is a pretty sweeping condemnation.
I'm not arguing that there isn't plenty of shame to go around, but there's reason to be proud, too.
Maybe it's just me, but I always trip over 'absolute' statements.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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I don't know, my friend. No pride in the achievements of our ancestors is a pretty sweeping condemnation.
I'm not arguing that there isn't plenty of shame to go around, but there's reason to be proud, too.
Maybe it's just me, but I always trip over 'absolute' statements.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thanks for the review
Gary
Comment from Andrewajgblue
A wonderful message within your writing, it is like a well said proverb, I loved the picture that you have chose to go with it, excellent work ,
Andrew
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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A wonderful message within your writing, it is like a well said proverb, I loved the picture that you have chose to go with it, excellent work ,
Andrew
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thanks Andrew
Gary
Comment from gazzagodbod
great little poem this such wise words indeed well done my friend had to be a sixer from the gazzagodbod well done my friend
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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great little poem this such wise words indeed well done my friend had to be a sixer from the gazzagodbod well done my friend
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thank you