Writings From the Heart
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Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of social commentary! looking at the world with different eyes and valuing it differently as our own.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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this is a fine piece of social commentary! looking at the world with different eyes and valuing it differently as our own.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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thanks rebekka
Comment from CR Delport
I think man holds too much power as it is. No wonder the world is in such chaos, and it is only getting worse. This is another very well written poem.
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I think man holds too much power as it is. No wonder the world is in such chaos, and it is only getting worse. This is another very well written poem.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you CR
Comment from royowen
Great write, if we prefer others before ourselves, care for our neighbour, our child, our spouse, brother/sister, the guy that's in the gutter, in fact anyone who is in our sphere of influence, we are fulfilling the law of love, great write, articulate, expressively declared, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
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Great write, if we prefer others before ourselves, care for our neighbour, our child, our spouse, brother/sister, the guy that's in the gutter, in fact anyone who is in our sphere of influence, we are fulfilling the law of love, great write, articulate, expressively declared, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thanks Roy
Comment from Eric1
Hi Gary, yet another piece of excellent writing, but may I say, that unlike your other wonderful poetry, this one seems to finish abruptly, it's as though there was another couple of lines and they have been omitted, well, perhaps it's me misreading it, after all it is very early.
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Hi Gary, yet another piece of excellent writing, but may I say, that unlike your other wonderful poetry, this one seems to finish abruptly, it's as though there was another couple of lines and they have been omitted, well, perhaps it's me misreading it, after all it is very early.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks Eric
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So welcome Gary.
Comment from mikemagine
I believe that every person has God-given goodness in his or her heart. I also believe that, for now at least, our world, as we know it, is in the hands of a mighty adversary. I believe that at the RIGHT time this horrid foe will be defeated. He and his countless minions.
Visitors from another planet or galaxy would likely tremble in terror when seeing our world as it is.
Your poem is well-written and wise. It asks vital questions!
Mike
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I believe that every person has God-given goodness in his or her heart. I also believe that, for now at least, our world, as we know it, is in the hands of a mighty adversary. I believe that at the RIGHT time this horrid foe will be defeated. He and his countless minions.
Visitors from another planet or galaxy would likely tremble in terror when seeing our world as it is.
Your poem is well-written and wise. It asks vital questions!
Mike
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thank you Mike
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My pleasure!
Comment from Jackarrie
Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold
Women unfortunately do not have the balance of power in decision making, therefore it is the macho vote every time.
aliens would not be impressed with us at all, the selfish gene that evolved in us it quite evident.
Well done, Mary
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Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold
Women unfortunately do not have the balance of power in decision making, therefore it is the macho vote every time.
aliens would not be impressed with us at all, the selfish gene that evolved in us it quite evident.
Well done, Mary
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thank you Mary
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nicely done, gary. You've asked a very pertinent and compelling question in your well metered and rhymed poetic query. What would an alien race think of mankind having met up with him for the first time? Would they be friend, or foe? Would you, as men, see these invaders as a threat, or a Godsend that we can glean new information and technologies from?
I personally feel that alien races, were they to exist, would take one look at how devastating cruel we are to our own species, and fly away as fast as they could. They would avoid us like the Bubonic Plague...
Well done~Dean
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Nicely done, gary. You've asked a very pertinent and compelling question in your well metered and rhymed poetic query. What would an alien race think of mankind having met up with him for the first time? Would they be friend, or foe? Would you, as men, see these invaders as a threat, or a Godsend that we can glean new information and technologies from?
I personally feel that alien races, were they to exist, would take one look at how devastating cruel we are to our own species, and fly away as fast as they could. They would avoid us like the Bubonic Plague...
Well done~Dean
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Dean
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Sure, Gary, anytime.:)
Comment from c_lucas
Being created in the image of God, Man has the ability to create, but in a much lesser degree. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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Being created in the image of God, Man has the ability to create, but in a much lesser degree. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Mr C
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi GW,
Great questions in this poem. As is the artwork spot on.
I notice some of your sentences end with a '?' and some no punctuation at all. Is that intentional or oversight?
As always a really good and though provoking piece.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
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Hi GW,
Great questions in this poem. As is the artwork spot on.
I notice some of your sentences end with a '?' and some no punctuation at all. Is that intentional or oversight?
As always a really good and though provoking piece.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thanks Jax
Comment from lalajovanoski
What beautiful imagery in this. Great use of calm and peaceful words to show your images. I loved the feeling of a dream like state while absorbing nature around you. Great job on this.! Exquisitely composed. Love, L J
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What beautiful imagery in this. Great use of calm and peaceful words to show your images. I loved the feeling of a dream like state while absorbing nature around you. Great job on this.! Exquisitely composed. Love, L J
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you for this LJ