Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about an imagination about white tulips are symbols of goodness and honour and there are no regrets and misunderstandings; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you, friend!
Hadn't written one of the cleave poem is a long time. They are stinkers to compose!
Thank you!
diane

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Honestly, I think a stick is better. Yet, a more mature response would be your statements, making my stomach turn. Well stated, I found touching in given consideration, in my opinion a good read.

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 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Hah!
Holy Toledo TPAC!
You don't like flowers and "a stick is better?"
Methinks you need a hug!
My words make your "stomach turn?" Yikes!
I'll try harder... :)
diane

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'I Image' writing prompt.
Your Cleave Poem tells the I Image story 3 ways.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thanks, Sharon!