Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Exceptional

You sure have a way with words. It is a good commentary look at the state of America at this time. I think few would recognize anything of importance. Well written!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

Thanx so much, Rebecca! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 12-Sep-2020

You're quite welcome. Your writing ability astonishes me. Love it!

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Super-duper A-Z -- ambitious undertaking--you triumphed! Apt message for these turbulent times--semantics exploit fear and rage indeed! Cheers. LIZ (gage is generally spelled gauge)

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

Thanx so much, Liz, for your review and the 'fix' on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first poem in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share (you know, without knives and such - lol!): goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez

Excellent

This is so deep. You are such an amazing writer and I am in constant ahhh of your writing. Thank you so much for sharing your talents. This was an awesome piece.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

Thanx so much, Sandra, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Dear Yvette,
Show off! :) :) :)
And you know that comes from my heart of hearts 'cause I can't write one of the #@%%%Q#$ ABC poems to save my life!
Each stanza is a poem unto itself. Begs to be read aloud AND begs to be read again and again!
I can retire now for the evening knowing that you have upped the bar on any and all ABC poems I have ever and/or will read!
Loved every morsel!

Love ya!
diane

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

LOL!! Yeah -- trying to be a bit obtuse and still get a few points across.... I literally sat down and took some real time to write this one... was the first in some time, and it really felt good once it was finished, ya know? I'm seriously determined to find my new routine this week as I'm sick of sorting through feelings and crap and I'm moving forward. Think I'm actually feeling 'good' again with some things and others that are out of my control will just have to stay there: out of my control. :) :) :) And you know what? I'm good with that too!
So, thank you, my Beautiful Friend for those stars... gonna finish 'catching up' this weekend and start my real writing again: I know I'm better because I've actually started to think about all my crazy characters again.... not as much as I used to, but, dammit, I'm getting there!! ;) :) Glad you retired in 'peace' the other night - lol!! ;) You take care up there and I'll talk atcha later, my friend! ;) Yvette