Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
hey
great contest entry
the form is very good and the content is well represented with vivid accuracy
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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hey
great contest entry
the form is very good and the content is well represented with vivid accuracy
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you smileycloud
Comment from Sandy P.
This is absolutely beautiful! Your poem meets all the requirements for the contest. I love "Poets of gravity" - wonderful words. The artwork is the perfect compliment. Very well done - best of luck in the contest.
Sandy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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This is absolutely beautiful! Your poem meets all the requirements for the contest. I love "Poets of gravity" - wonderful words. The artwork is the perfect compliment. Very well done - best of luck in the contest.
Sandy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Sandy. Your comments are awesome.
Comment from jahees
this is a great poem with a timely subject. You have done well with the syllable count for the contest. Your words flow well and paint a colorful picture of an Olympic scenario in skiing. No nits. Great photo art to complete your presentation of your rictameter.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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this is a great poem with a timely subject. You have done well with the syllable count for the contest. Your words flow well and paint a colorful picture of an Olympic scenario in skiing. No nits. Great photo art to complete your presentation of your rictameter.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you for checking my work!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Poet!
Your richtameter is in grand form and you
sure have captured the 'skier' well in this
well constructed poem. Your word selection
is superb within that strict syllable count
and it was a pleasure to read.
Linda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Hi Poet!
Your richtameter is in grand form and you
sure have captured the 'skier' well in this
well constructed poem. Your word selection
is superb within that strict syllable count
and it was a pleasure to read.
Linda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Linda for the great review and commenting in this work.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Judian James
Hi there. Thanks for the high payout. I found the first half to be nothing more than a statement. However, the second half is poetry and I enjoyed it. I would go back and tweak the first four lines to get your point across in the same fashion as your second-half approach.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Hi there. Thanks for the high payout. I found the first half to be nothing more than a statement. However, the second half is poetry and I enjoyed it. I would go back and tweak the first four lines to get your point across in the same fashion as your second-half approach.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Judian. I see your point. I changed the second line.
Comment from Razz
Very well written.
Very entertaining.
Flow is perfect.
This poem really moves well.
Photo is amazing too.
Thanks,
Razz
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Very well written.
Very entertaining.
Flow is perfect.
This poem really moves well.
Photo is amazing too.
Thanks,
Razz
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Razz for reviewing this work.
Comment from AmorGentil
Skiers dancing in the sky
Dancing with the wind
Flying with their arms
as Wings
But always coming to rest...
with their feet
Nice poem, congratulation!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Skiers dancing in the sky
Dancing with the wind
Flying with their arms
as Wings
But always coming to rest...
with their feet
Nice poem, congratulation!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Muchas Gracias AmorGentil!
Comment from c_lucas
Going after the Gold
Many a conflict unfold
Trials of succes are told
By the young and the Bold
This is a very well written pooem with a very smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Going after the Gold
Many a conflict unfold
Trials of succes are told
By the young and the Bold
This is a very well written pooem with a very smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Great work my friend. I would call it Going for the Gold .
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You're welcome, Amada. Charlie
Comment from Frozen Fire
Great piece. I admire the dedication and discipline it takes for all of these athletes to achieve such tremendous feats. Nice job putting words into action...the imagery is wonderful in this poem!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Great piece. I admire the dedication and discipline it takes for all of these athletes to achieve such tremendous feats. Nice job putting words into action...the imagery is wonderful in this poem!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Frozen Fire!
Comment from pugdogy
you have a well written poem here about the flying skiers at the olympic games,,,to watch them soar through the air with such grace is amazing,,,good job...
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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you have a well written poem here about the flying skiers at the olympic games,,,to watch them soar through the air with such grace is amazing,,,good job...
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the great review.