Writings From the Heart
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Comment from gramalot8
Deepwater, a very nice wonderfully written poem to honor your mom, and I'm guessing, your grandmother. Good job of verse, rhyme and imagery. Love the picture.
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Deepwater, a very nice wonderfully written poem to honor your mom, and I'm guessing, your grandmother. Good job of verse, rhyme and imagery. Love the picture.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thank you gramalot
Comment from patmedium
Gary, this is lovely. A nice paean of praise to the two ladies who influenced your early years. Congratulations on a good, strong write. Pat.
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Gary, this is lovely. A nice paean of praise to the two ladies who influenced your early years. Congratulations on a good, strong write. Pat.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thanks Pat for the review and comment
Comment from Bellringer
Very touching poem. Your love for these two dear souls comes though clearly. I like your closing line, "My heart still carries a tear." Best wishes and blessings sent your way. Hector
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Very touching poem. Your love for these two dear souls comes though clearly. I like your closing line, "My heart still carries a tear." Best wishes and blessings sent your way. Hector
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thank you Hector
Comment from Kingsland
This piece is formatted well with very even lines in its presentation. It is not very poetic, But it does get its point across and the formatting gives it a boost. So it is still a five star presentation as far as I am concerned... John
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This piece is formatted well with very even lines in its presentation. It is not very poetic, But it does get its point across and the formatting gives it a boost. So it is still a five star presentation as far as I am concerned... John
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thanks john
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
My guess is that this poem is about the two most important women in your life, your mother and your wife. Nice tribute to them. well done.
Duane
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deepwater,
My guess is that this poem is about the two most important women in your life, your mother and your wife. Nice tribute to them. well done.
Duane
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thanks Duane
Comment from pugrpoems
Dear deepwater,
Beautiful! Warm and touching memories of people long gone on the other side of the Jordan! You did a wonderful job of showing your love for them in a sincere piece. Thanks,pugrpoems.
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Dear deepwater,
Beautiful! Warm and touching memories of people long gone on the other side of the Jordan! You did a wonderful job of showing your love for them in a sincere piece. Thanks,pugrpoems.
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thanks pugrpoems
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Gary,
This is a lovely tribute to the most important women in your life. Am I right in assuming one is your grandmother and the other your mother or wife? It really doesn't matter as the poem is wonderful and I enjoyed it. Well done....chey
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Hi Gary,
This is a lovely tribute to the most important women in your life. Am I right in assuming one is your grandmother and the other your mother or wife? It really doesn't matter as the poem is wonderful and I enjoyed it. Well done....chey
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thank you chey for reading Mom and Garm,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very beautiful poem written about two wonderful women in your life, Your mom and garn. Good job.
Dear mom and garn (I am almost positive that Mom and Garn should be capitalized here. If you would have said, my mom and garn, then no, but you didn't.)
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This is a very beautiful poem written about two wonderful women in your life, Your mom and garn. Good job.
Dear mom and garn (I am almost positive that Mom and Garn should be capitalized here. If you would have said, my mom and garn, then no, but you didn't.)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thanks Barbara will change and thanks for the review
Comment from JimLee
The comfort of knowing we will be together again makes life livable. Your poem give that hope and touches heart strings with memories.
Did you mean GRAN where you said GARN?
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The comfort of knowing we will be together again makes life livable. Your poem give that hope and touches heart strings with memories.
Did you mean GRAN where you said GARN?
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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jim its Garm and thanks for reading myfriend
Comment from knowledge
A beautiful ode to your mother. This is well written and heartfelt poetry. If you mother is living, I suggest that you give it to her.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
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A beautiful ode to your mother. This is well written and heartfelt poetry. If you mother is living, I suggest that you give it to her.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
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thank you Knowledge for the review mom left us some years back