Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hi, Barbara, again I like this chapter for the interaction between Joe, and 'the burst of energy'. I like this description of Cassie. Guess I'm learning a lot from you, as right now I'm writing a story about a child like her who changes a lot because of some 'accident'. Thanks.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review and continued support.

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

Barbara, as always, loving and enjoying the relationship between your characters. Your words reach inside us and help to further our desire to read more. Good job.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Oh yea, don't forget to ask Mom - yeah - yea is how they say yes in votes in Congress
what tonight's reunion will bring - add the apostrophe
Oh, I really liked this conversation between Sara and Joe - some playfulness, some sentimentality, some flirting - I am rooting for them big time :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review and continued support. I will get on those corrections. No matter how many times I review it, I still mess up.

Comment from Isaiah Ramesses

Excellent

Very good, Barbara. Your book is coming along just fine. Your characters personalities are revealed more here. I'm enjoying, and found no errors. Good read.

Isaiah

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review.