Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Chapter 6 part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Shirley McLain
A wonderful story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter when you get it completed. I want it now but as usual I will take it when you post it. Once again speedy recovery from your surgery.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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A wonderful story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter when you get it completed. I want it now but as usual I will take it when you post it. Once again speedy recovery from your surgery.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Thesis
It's a great place to leave the story, Barbara. Relax, all your fans will be here when you return.
This is a very interesting chapter. Finally, they get to be alone and make love all afternoon. WHat a wonderful way to spend some alone time. Although I think they are being naive thinking Cassie doesn't know what they're doing.
Maybe she came in, saw they were occupied and went to a friends house, then again, maybe not. - John
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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It's a great place to leave the story, Barbara. Relax, all your fans will be here when you return.
This is a very interesting chapter. Finally, they get to be alone and make love all afternoon. WHat a wonderful way to spend some alone time. Although I think they are being naive thinking Cassie doesn't know what they're doing.
Maybe she came in, saw they were occupied and went to a friends house, then again, maybe not. - John
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I think the answer is maybe not. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from lola29
I'm really hoping Joe is sincere, but I'm a bit hestitant to believe he's all that. I'm not sure what Sara means regarding the pain--if it's physical or a mother's intuition. I sure hope nothing has happened to Cassie.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I'm really hoping Joe is sincere, but I'm a bit hestitant to believe he's all that. I'm not sure what Sara means regarding the pain--if it's physical or a mother's intuition. I sure hope nothing has happened to Cassie.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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It's mother's intuition, I'm afraid. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Sacred Heart
There you go with another great chapter!
Beautifully written dialog and a great cliffhanger
for the ending! You leave me wanting more which is good.
Best of luck with your surgery, don't do to much to soon!
I'll be sending good thoughts your way for a speedy recovery. Take care sweet, Blessings Light Love Patty
Hope your family spoils you rotten!!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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There you go with another great chapter!
Beautifully written dialog and a great cliffhanger
for the ending! You leave me wanting more which is good.
Best of luck with your surgery, don't do to much to soon!
I'll be sending good thoughts your way for a speedy recovery. Take care sweet, Blessings Light Love Patty
Hope your family spoils you rotten!!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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My boys tend to spoil me, but I usually end up getting trouble with them because I can't stay down for long. Thank you for the kind review and support.
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You are welcome my friend! If you like, Ip me your address and I will send you a get well card with a little surprise. Love Patty
Comment from LadyWave
I sense Joe coming to Cassie's rescue, but I hope the reason she needs rescuing won't be anything too terrible. My prayers are with you this week! Hope you're back to writing soon.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I sense Joe coming to Cassie's rescue, but I hope the reason she needs rescuing won't be anything too terrible. My prayers are with you this week! Hope you're back to writing soon.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. You are partially correct.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is another well written chapter. The story moves along nicely and that was a great hook at the end.
["You've showered with other women, haven't you?"] - I think it was a little bit unrealistic of Sarah to say that. Talk about kill a moment :-) I know she'd been hurt and finds it hard to trust. She's also a small town girl and very moral, but even with her one-off experience, she must be able to tell the difference between making love, and quickie sex with no feeling. Asking that question at that time, makes her come across as a bit of a bunny boiler- which I know she's not. Then again she might be ... it would certainly add an interesting twist ;-)
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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This is another well written chapter. The story moves along nicely and that was a great hook at the end.
["You've showered with other women, haven't you?"] - I think it was a little bit unrealistic of Sarah to say that. Talk about kill a moment :-) I know she'd been hurt and finds it hard to trust. She's also a small town girl and very moral, but even with her one-off experience, she must be able to tell the difference between making love, and quickie sex with no feeling. Asking that question at that time, makes her come across as a bit of a bunny boiler- which I know she's not. Then again she might be ... it would certainly add an interesting twist ;-)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your review. I will reconsider that statement. I was concerned about getting her insecurities into the story.
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maybe it would be better to have her think it, but not come right out and say it. I only mention it as all the way through the focus has been on their courtship. He could make the most insecure person feel safe with his actions. Asking about other women when you've just made love with the passion they have, suggests deeper issues ... scary lol x
Comment from patmedium
Clever girl ... cliffhanger extraordinaire! LOL. Not-to-worry, Barbara back and up-and-running again is what your fans all want, sunshine! Never mind the book ... that'll be all-the-more welcome for a bit of a wait! xxx
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Clever girl ... cliffhanger extraordinaire! LOL. Not-to-worry, Barbara back and up-and-running again is what your fans all want, sunshine! Never mind the book ... that'll be all-the-more welcome for a bit of a wait! xxx
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I didn't mean to leave such a cliffhanger, but that's how the pages fell. I wrote this about five years ago. It takes me that long to edit.
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I enjoyed the read, dear. xxx
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I am leaving for New York next Tuesday and will be gone until the 20th. If you post another chapter I will catch up. Before I forget your line...
as Sara walk from the room.
I think you mean "walked from the room" This is a great chapter but the last few lines gave me pause. I do hope nothing bad has happened to Cassie but you did say there would be some twists and turns in this story. As usual you have written this perfectly and it makes me want to read more. Hang in there, my friend, before you know it the surgery and treatment will be over. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara,
I am leaving for New York next Tuesday and will be gone until the 20th. If you post another chapter I will catch up. Before I forget your line...
as Sara walk from the room.
I think you mean "walked from the room" This is a great chapter but the last few lines gave me pause. I do hope nothing bad has happened to Cassie but you did say there would be some twists and turns in this story. As usual you have written this perfectly and it makes me want to read more. Hang in there, my friend, before you know it the surgery and treatment will be over. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for catching that for me. I hate making those type of errors. There are some not so nice twists coming our way.
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Oh dear...now you are going to make me worry until the next chapter!
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sorry
Comment from sherr
Hi there Barbara,
I hope first for your quick recovery and for you to BE Well.
You really left me hanging with the abrupt ending and I will definitely be anxiously waiting for your return writing. I very much enjoy your style of writing and so I will contain myself until then! Good job. sherr
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Hi there Barbara,
I hope first for your quick recovery and for you to BE Well.
You really left me hanging with the abrupt ending and I will definitely be anxiously waiting for your return writing. I very much enjoy your style of writing and so I will contain myself until then! Good job. sherr
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I did not plan for the ending to fall as it did, but it's the away the pages fell. I wrote this story about 5 years ago. It takes me a long time to edit.
Comment from KayteeF
Barbara, Firstly, don't worry if you are not able to post the next piece for some time. Your friends understand and I'm sure would not expect you to do any more posting until you are feeling up to it. We will just have to wait on the edge of our seat until you are able to post without being in too much discomfort.
I have plenty of reading from looking at your other work so far. Don't worry, you have enough on your plate.
Good luck, Cathleen
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Barbara, Firstly, don't worry if you are not able to post the next piece for some time. Your friends understand and I'm sure would not expect you to do any more posting until you are feeling up to it. We will just have to wait on the edge of our seat until you are able to post without being in too much discomfort.
I have plenty of reading from looking at your other work so far. Don't worry, you have enough on your plate.
Good luck, Cathleen
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.