Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Part 4 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from WilliamDeen
Another good chapter... Can't wait to find out more about Anna!
I found no mistakes and have no comments to make it better~
Thanks for sharing, Pamela
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Another good chapter... Can't wait to find out more about Anna!
I found no mistakes and have no comments to make it better~
Thanks for sharing, Pamela
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
If anyone can get a lead on Anna, it will be Everett. You are doing a good job of maintaining the mystery and suspense. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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If anyone can get a lead on Anna, it will be Everett. You are doing a good job of maintaining the mystery and suspense. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
I like how you bring such a nice home atmosphere with the tasty sounding breakfast.
Great conversation between Troy and Everett,
So now the search will start to find Anna
Gert
PS
To let you know I'm not going to post new poems for awhile,
just re- post my old ones.
I don't have the time to compose any new ones.
My day is presently filled up doing therapy, home exercises, walking and working my new hip in a pool; for another month.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Hi Barb
I like how you bring such a nice home atmosphere with the tasty sounding breakfast.
Great conversation between Troy and Everett,
So now the search will start to find Anna
Gert
PS
To let you know I'm not going to post new poems for awhile,
just re- post my old ones.
I don't have the time to compose any new ones.
My day is presently filled up doing therapy, home exercises, walking and working my new hip in a pool; for another month.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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I understand. I will be praying for a speedy and painless recovery.
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Thnk you
So far it hasn't been what you call as a painless recovery ( must be my age?)
Love
Gert
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I don't believe any recovery is painless. I went to my radialogist Friday for my one month visit. She told me how well I'm doing. I asked, "When can I expect it to quit hurting?" She said in about another month. I've marked it on my calendar July 17th, I'm supposed to be pain free.
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Well I guess the Doctors want to give us a positive attitude
( how they want us to feel)
Gert
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Maybe, I don't understand it.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, showing the close relationship that troy has with his parents and the way he also keeps up with his businesses.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, showing the close relationship that troy has with his parents and the way he also keeps up with his businesses.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I was so hoping this chapter would reveal news about Anna. You are a meanie for making me wait! (smile) I am glad Everett the PI will be looking for Anna but I agree with Troy she is probably hiding somewhere were she can't be found. I can't wait to see what happens next! Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I was so hoping this chapter would reveal news about Anna. You are a meanie for making me wait! (smile) I am glad Everett the PI will be looking for Anna but I agree with Troy she is probably hiding somewhere were she can't be found. I can't wait to see what happens next! Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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I can promise you at some time in chapter 6, Anna's whereabouts will be revealed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, I've enjoyed breakfast with Troy and his parents, thank you ... As you say this is a bridge chapter, so I'll cross the river and be on the next bank with you soon. As always, smooth as silk.
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Hi, Barbara, I've enjoyed breakfast with Troy and his parents, thank you ... As you say this is a bridge chapter, so I'll cross the river and be on the next bank with you soon. As always, smooth as silk.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Another brilliant chapter add, Barbara, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and I cannot suggest anything for improvemnt, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Another brilliant chapter add, Barbara, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and I cannot suggest anything for improvemnt, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank youi for your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
She's hard to say no too. - say no to
Excellent dialogue - every chapter can't be one filled with high drama - bridge chapters reflect the rhythms of real life :-) B rooke
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She's hard to say no too. - say no to
Excellent dialogue - every chapter can't be one filled with high drama - bridge chapters reflect the rhythms of real life :-) B rooke
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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I received a couple of 4's for my last chapter because there was nothing happening. Thank you for your kind reveiw and I will fixt that error.