Comment from Sarah_Goldwell

Excellent

This is a action packed chapter, which kept me on the edge of my seat. The scenes with Bobby well well described and very authentic.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbra, you did a great job writing this chapter where anna decides to fight back, i enjoyed reading it and hope for a happy ending for her

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from JW

Excellent

Wow. What a violent chapter. However, it is quite appropriate for the storyline and this chapter will make a great addition to your book.

It is such a shame that many times scenes like this occur in real life.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review and insight.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Oh crap, and I mean that in the best way possible. This was penned with a deeper anger hate and abuse, Anna's attempt to get away and the final bullet that has taken him out.
I'm just worried where the knife is and if she fell on it.

Penned as always with great detail and emotion.
Oh crap again I have to wait for the next post.:)

Thanks for sharing, this was penned well my friend.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Yes, it is difficult to come in on the middle of a story. The beginning of this one gave me a few problems. But after I figured it out, it was then easy to read. I really felt for Anna and glad Bobby got what he deserved. Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing with us!

smiles,

deb

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from c_lucas

Exceptional

Excellent chapter. This is very well written and has a very strong hook at the end. There is a strong flow of words, making for a suspensful read.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review and your continued support of my writing.

reply by c_lucas on 15-Apr-2012

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

It sounds to me as if one of the SWAT people got a clean shot, but did his knife find a target? One certainly hopes not.

Well written, good drama and great tension in there.

Nothing I could see to correct.

Patrick

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Ohhhh I hope it's because one of their snipers got him. He is such a bad one, that Bobby. But of course we're gonna have to wait until the next episode to find out. He better be dead.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Gungalo on 15-Apr-2012

I thank you for the story. Can't wait for the next part.