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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from tinams
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This is another fine chapter Barbara. I can really relate to the memory loss which I suppose are due to all the hits to her head. I really enjoyed the read :) Tina

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi Barbara,

Looks like she's on the road to full recovery now which is a good sign. Do you have a "happy ever after" planned for them?

As usual, well written and edited, you seem to have covered everything.

Patrick

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
    Thank you for the kind review. This is a romance so it will have a happy ending, but probably different than you would expect.
Comment from LJ-HBIC
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This piece really hit home for me for two reasons, I have a very good friend who was in a violent relationship, and I myself am dealing with repressed memories of most of my childhood. Abuse of any kind is the most horrific thing a person can ever deal with. It affects so many parts of our lives. Really great chapter!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Another great post as Anna enters her healing time.

The memory loss was well done in this chapter. I suppose too all the hits to her head and concussion can take time to settle and heal.

Excellent work penned with your usual skill.
I enjoyed what you did in this one. Now I am hungry though!

Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
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At least Anna and her son will be showered with love. There is no stronger healing agent known to man. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 03-Jun-2012
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie