Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "part one, Chapter 21"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbara,
I thought you did a great describing Anna's temporary memory loss and aprehension. She somehow instinctively knows to go to her apartment to get at the bottom of her fear. Done with much skill and realistic dialog. Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Dear Barbara,
I thought you did a great describing Anna's temporary memory loss and aprehension. She somehow instinctively knows to go to her apartment to get at the bottom of her fear. Done with much skill and realistic dialog. Great job--Ted
Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Good as always - shows how the mind has all sorts of tricks, some of which, like this, are used as a kind of protective shield. I'm glad you carried the story on past what would have been one obvious end point.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Good as always - shows how the mind has all sorts of tricks, some of which, like this, are used as a kind of protective shield. I'm glad you carried the story on past what would have been one obvious end point.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I feel I have left things open than need closure.
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I'm wondering if you have written yourself into a kind of corner - there can really be no happy ending here. You have avoided the obvious one - bad guys go to jail, heroine and hero walk into the sunset (with baby in tow) - but in reality there is no recovery from this kind of trauma.
Steve
Comment from Anisa-
Another great addition. Looks like the memories are coming back to Anna. That would be a hard situation to be in. Great job with this one.
Anisa
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Another great addition. Looks like the memories are coming back to Anna. That would be a hard situation to be in. Great job with this one.
Anisa
Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh oh, wondered what she was going to remember when she left for the apartment. It appears it is all going to come flooding back to her. Maybe it is for the best to be able to put it behind her.
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Oh oh, wondered what she was going to remember when she left for the apartment. It appears it is all going to come flooding back to her. Maybe it is for the best to be able to put it behind her.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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We'll have to wait and see. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh boy, maybe they will have toomove her out, eh?
Comment from c_lucas
Our brains tend to protect us against traumatic events. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an excellent read
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Our brains tend to protect us against traumatic events. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an excellent read
Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. You earned it.