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A Collection of my own Compositions for Christmas
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Comment from
JavaJunkie
This is a good intro, well written. I do think the very first line is a little abrupt. I like the message, and I am interested in reading more about these carols.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
Hmm will look at the first line and see what I can do. I guess it is to get attention, hehe. Thanks for your great review. I do take what folks say on board for consideration anyway.
Comment from
amada
This is a great introduction to your forthcoming book. i look forward to read it as long as my sight works with me. I will be there in spirit.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
Hi friend the book has been around for ages I only just did the intro today as I felt it was most needed. Thanks again. you have sight trouble I have sight and hearing and Vertigo probs but seems now our cooler weather has arrived (in Australia) the Vertigo has eased quite a lot and my hearing has returned mostly. I do understand ok. Appreciate you coming by.
Comment from
L.A.Matthies
Nicely worded as an introduction, brings forth your intent and message clearly. Also, gives the reader adequate background for what is to follow :)Linda
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
Hi Linda the following work has been around for ages I just felt it was time for an introduction to it all. Thanks so much for dropping by.
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