Writings From the Heart
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Comment from tati
Hi there,
I enjoyed reading your best short poem.
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
It says so much in so few words, with an amazing picture and a lovely message. I love the way you've crafted your two lines poem creating a flow of words and images. Great entry. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Warmest wishes,
tati, May 21, 2010
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Hi there,
I enjoyed reading your best short poem.
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
It says so much in so few words, with an amazing picture and a lovely message. I love the way you've crafted your two lines poem creating a flow of words and images. Great entry. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Warmest wishes,
tati, May 21, 2010
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Comment from Njorgensen
This is a beautifully written so short poem. The photo adds so much to the story you've written in your two lines, that it wouldn't be complete without it. Well done.
Nancy
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This is a beautifully written so short poem. The photo adds so much to the story you've written in your two lines, that it wouldn't be complete without it. Well done.
Nancy
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Comment from RazberryBullet
So few words, yet what poignancy in this simple poem. Liked the capitalized Birds. Somehow, it pulled the verses together.
Well done!
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So few words, yet what poignancy in this simple poem. Liked the capitalized Birds. Somehow, it pulled the verses together.
Well done!
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Comment from RebelRose
Very good short poem. Good writing prompt contest entry. The photo reminds me of one of my mother many years ago. Good luck in the contest.
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Very good short poem. Good writing prompt contest entry. The photo reminds me of one of my mother many years ago. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was very interesting a very contemporary piece excellent very enjoyable, great imagery I thought this was passionate, with a great deal of clarity and understanding well done no errors or mistakes Alexander
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I thought this was very interesting a very contemporary piece excellent very enjoyable, great imagery I thought this was passionate, with a great deal of clarity and understanding well done no errors or mistakes Alexander
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Comment from thequillman
Well written. The emotion and essense of trust in the love of one's life, is beautifully displayed. Sometimes it is best said within the confines of just one well crafted line. Good job.
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Well written. The emotion and essense of trust in the love of one's life, is beautifully displayed. Sometimes it is best said within the confines of just one well crafted line. Good job.
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Comment from Mastery
Hi, author, I'm not too sure I understand the meaning of this poem, but it sounds good. LOl...The picture is sure original and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Bob
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Hi, author, I'm not too sure I understand the meaning of this poem, but it sounds good. LOl...The picture is sure original and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Bob
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thanks Bob
Comment from dorts
To me the poem depicts a young lady anxious to meet a lover full of expectation.Someone who has been away for a long time, maybe he was in the war. She reminds me of a wartime bride. The picture tells all. I liked the poem.
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To me the poem depicts a young lady anxious to meet a lover full of expectation.Someone who has been away for a long time, maybe he was in the war. She reminds me of a wartime bride. The picture tells all. I liked the poem.
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Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Outstanding short love poem. Awesome old photo you used. I'm impressed in so fee words you've written a beautifully emotional poem. I love the lines:
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
Your poem is a fabulous entry in the best short poem writing prompt. Good luck in the voting booth I'd recommend others to read your poem 'Hand In Hand.'
Missy.
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Poet,
Outstanding short love poem. Awesome old photo you used. I'm impressed in so fee words you've written a beautifully emotional poem. I love the lines:
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
Your poem is a fabulous entry in the best short poem writing prompt. Good luck in the voting booth I'd recommend others to read your poem 'Hand In Hand.'
Missy.
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thank you Missy
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a charming picture that of itself says it must have been about the time you have labeled it (1946). The poem is a bit mysterious, but I'm guessing the Birds on wing might be a pilot returning from the war? Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a charming picture that of itself says it must have been about the time you have labeled it (1946). The poem is a bit mysterious, but I'm guessing the Birds on wing might be a pilot returning from the war? Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
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thank you