Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Chapter 6 part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from marym224
Such a beautiful description of two people in love. Sensuous without being crass, and is no doubt how most of us would long to spend a day with the one we loved.
Ihad to smile at the concotion of a reason for Sara's wet hair. It is so typical. Your narrative, dialogue and phraseology are all excellent - well done, Barbara.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Such a beautiful description of two people in love. Sensuous without being crass, and is no doubt how most of us would long to spend a day with the one we loved.
Ihad to smile at the concotion of a reason for Sara's wet hair. It is so typical. Your narrative, dialogue and phraseology are all excellent - well done, Barbara.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from jadapenn
You caught me before I logged off. Very nice chapter. I love these two together. One feels comfortable in their company and like a fly on the wall. I think dear old David did a good job screaming at you and me. This writing is good. Did see a few telling instead of showing but I'm not going to worry you now. Really need to log off. Bye - jada
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You caught me before I logged off. Very nice chapter. I love these two together. One feels comfortable in their company and like a fly on the wall. I think dear old David did a good job screaming at you and me. This writing is good. Did see a few telling instead of showing but I'm not going to worry you now. Really need to log off. Bye - jada
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Good night Jada. I had problems with this, because I didn't want to go to much into the love making again, but wanted to the reader to know it was going on; hence the telling.
Comment from adewpearl
wrapped around Joes' waist - Joe's
I am delighted that you posted this week - I really did not expect a chapter, but it is a nice surprise. OH, I hope Cassie didn't come home, see them, and then run out. Of course, I hope there's no other bad reason for her being late either. You have me liking these three so much that I am all worried now!!! Again, excellent dialogue and a lovely romantic scene. Brooke
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wrapped around Joes' waist - Joe's
I am delighted that you posted this week - I really did not expect a chapter, but it is a nice surprise. OH, I hope Cassie didn't come home, see them, and then run out. Of course, I hope there's no other bad reason for her being late either. You have me liking these three so much that I am all worried now!!! Again, excellent dialogue and a lovely romantic scene. Brooke
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I fixed the error before I finished the review. I appreciate your support. I know I left it in a bad place. I really hope I can post next weekend.
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I hope you can too, but if you can't, you just worry about recuperating and taking great care of yourself as you let your men pamper you too!!! :-)
Comment from c_lucas
This is a well written chapter, leaving the reader wanting more. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck with your surgery.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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This is a well written chapter, leaving the reader wanting more. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck with your surgery.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is another good chapter to your book, i enjoyed reading it and i pray you have a swift recovery to your next surgery, i look forward to your next installment, but your health comes first, so i'll see you next chapter.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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this is another good chapter to your book, i enjoyed reading it and i pray you have a swift recovery to your next surgery, i look forward to your next installment, but your health comes first, so i'll see you next chapter.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your continued support.