Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Sara and Dani talk."Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from sizemore0409
I enjoyed reading this latest addition to your story. The writing has good consistency. I like your attention to detail, as you carefully construct the narrative, which flows smoothly and seamlessly. The imagery, the character-depictions and interactions, the thoughts, dialogue and emotions are all well-crafted, and woven nicely into the fabric of the story. Good work! Andy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed reading this latest addition to your story. The writing has good consistency. I like your attention to detail, as you carefully construct the narrative, which flows smoothly and seamlessly. The imagery, the character-depictions and interactions, the thoughts, dialogue and emotions are all well-crafted, and woven nicely into the fabric of the story. Good work! Andy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from zoocq
Thank you for another great chapter. I keep wishing that Sara keeps her heart open enough for Joe...they really are star-crossed lovers.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you for another great chapter. I keep wishing that Sara keeps her heart open enough for Joe...they really are star-crossed lovers.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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I think Sara is doing some soul searching. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from c00kieface925
"Would you some iced tea?"
i think you meant would you like some...
The story is developing many levels and I hope to read more of it as you continue to write more. I look forward to seeing how things play out.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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"Would you some iced tea?"
i think you meant would you like some...
The story is developing many levels and I hope to read more of it as you continue to write more. I look forward to seeing how things play out.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you for catching the missing like. I don't know how many times I have read it and thought it was there.
Comment from c_lucas
Trust is a hard thing to achieve or give until you know each other better. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Great Job.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Trust is a hard thing to achieve or give until you know each other better. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Great Job.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie