Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "part three, Chapter 19"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from robina1978
Is the code red about Anna=I sure hope not, but fear the worst. It seems like ages now that she is in hospital. Did not realise till now that Troy was an adopted child. One typo± I think you wrote Tory once instead of Troy. Well written as always.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Is the code red about Anna=I sure hope not, but fear the worst. It seems like ages now that she is in hospital. Did not realise till now that Troy was an adopted child. One typo± I think you wrote Tory once instead of Troy. Well written as always.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you, I will check out the Tory, my fingers mess up often. Troy was adopted after his stepfather murdered his mother. That was established in chapter 2, I think.
Comment from Gungalo
Sigh please let her be okay and not die. After all she has been through it would really be too bad to see her go now. Pleaseeeeee...
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Sigh please let her be okay and not die. After all she has been through it would really be too bad to see her go now. Pleaseeeeee...
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. It will be a while before we find out if Anna's okay.
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Sigh.