Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "A stroll in the woods"Musings of an old man -2020
26 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
JLR your free verse poem that is in your chapter A stroll in the woods is so true when I take a leisure walk in our Vermont
the woods moist with dew
dew does glisten in the light
light that turns our heads too,
(makes us to take time to sip our jacket and cover our heads
Gert
A looping poem about a nature stroll
Muses of the Heart
A stroll in the woods
by JLR
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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JLR your free verse poem that is in your chapter A stroll in the woods is so true when I take a leisure walk in our Vermont
the woods moist with dew
dew does glisten in the light
light that turns our heads too,
(makes us to take time to sip our jacket and cover our heads
Gert
A looping poem about a nature stroll
Muses of the Heart
A stroll in the woods
by JLR
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Gert, thank you for taking the time to read my poetic submission.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
A beautiful loop poem! I find these difficult to write and still have the poem make sense with so many words repeated. You did an excellent job of that. The alternatiing left/right/center justified added interest.
Well done - exceptional!
Susan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A beautiful loop poem! I find these difficult to write and still have the poem make sense with so many words repeated. You did an excellent job of that. The alternatiing left/right/center justified added interest.
Well done - exceptional!
Susan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Susan, I am quite honored for your time, comments and this six-star review. I appreciate your validation on this loop poem.
Comment from Therese Caron
Excellent looping poem! Your imagery is very good and each line and each stanza flow effortlessly to the next. You chose a stunning image to complement your words. Very nice work. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Excellent looping poem! Your imagery is very good and each line and each stanza flow effortlessly to the next. You chose a stunning image to complement your words. Very nice work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Therese, thank you so much!
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful entry in the Loop Poem Contest as it shares the crisp mood of autumn with its colorful leaves falling down and twirling about in the wind. I enjoyed reading it very much.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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This is a beautiful entry in the Loop Poem Contest as it shares the crisp mood of autumn with its colorful leaves falling down and twirling about in the wind. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Spangle, it is good see you back. I am grateful for your time taken to read and comment on my loop poem.
Comment from Minglement
Wishing I had a six to award this lovely, lyrical poem. I felt as though I was there, playing in the brisk woodsy air. I loved how you staggered the verses. Your last verse was my favorite :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Wishing I had a six to award this lovely, lyrical poem. I felt as though I was there, playing in the brisk woodsy air. I loved how you staggered the verses. Your last verse was my favorite :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Ahh, thank you that means alot too me,
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. I can visualize a walk in the autumn woods and the art work is spot on, Technically sound and a interesting lay out. Strong finish. Good luck in the contest. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Very good. I can visualize a walk in the autumn woods and the art work is spot on, Technically sound and a interesting lay out. Strong finish. Good luck in the contest. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Taurus, thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Jim.
-I like how you presented
your poem.
-Effective imagery, rhyme
and looped lines that flow well.
-You wrote a good poem about
this stroll in the woods, and
the impact it made on you.
-I particularly like the final two lines.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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-Very nice image, Jim.
-I like how you presented
your poem.
-Effective imagery, rhyme
and looped lines that flow well.
-You wrote a good poem about
this stroll in the woods, and
the impact it made on you.
-I particularly like the final two lines.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Pa, thank you!
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You are very welcome, Jim.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A stroll in the woods
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
A nice looping poem about a nature stroll. Great imagery and the presentation is outstanding....I love the picture.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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A stroll in the woods
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
A nice looping poem about a nature stroll. Great imagery and the presentation is outstanding....I love the picture.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Gypsy Blue Rose, thanks for taking the time to read and review my loop poem.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, how original and clever you are, to format your poem like a meandering path through the woods on a cold winter morning.
I love your line about your collars, covering up your grins
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Dear JLR, how original and clever you are, to format your poem like a meandering path through the woods on a cold winter morning.
I love your line about your collars, covering up your grins
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Suzanna, thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine loop poem and you managed to stay on track on your stroll in the woods here and I loved the end line referring the leaves that twirl like whirling dervishes! A nice touch. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A fine loop poem and you managed to stay on track on your stroll in the woods here and I loved the end line referring the leaves that twirl like whirling dervishes! A nice touch. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much Dolly!