Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Aussie
"Behold I stand at the door and knock.If any man hear my voice and let me in, I will sup with him and he with me." Bible. You turned your face to Him and He rewarded you with a sign. We are told not to ask for signs (Bible) this sign was His love towards you. Excellent, blessings, K XX
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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"Behold I stand at the door and knock.If any man hear my voice and let me in, I will sup with him and he with me." Bible. You turned your face to Him and He rewarded you with a sign. We are told not to ask for signs (Bible) this sign was His love towards you. Excellent, blessings, K XX
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Aussie, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my Faith poem.
Comment from Gloria ....
An excellent free verse testimony of your faith, J. Strong references and superb and yet subtle imagery to illustrate your Angels that were sent to bring you peace.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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An excellent free verse testimony of your faith, J. Strong references and superb and yet subtle imagery to illustrate your Angels that were sent to bring you peace.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Gloria, your good wishes are so appreciated!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is beautiful, Jim. I was so blessed as I was reading it and the testimony of faith in our loving God. He does send angels and bathes our lives in peace. So well done. Wish I had a six for you!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This is beautiful, Jim. I was so blessed as I was reading it and the testimony of faith in our loving God. He does send angels and bathes our lives in peace. So well done. Wish I had a six for you!!
Melissa
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Meissa, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this Faith poem. will take your virtual six anytime :) Be well my dear friend!
Comment from royowen
Yes, there is a burgeoning awareness that grows with the passage of time, and an ever growing place of unfamiliarity taking the form of a person, because God is much larger than a person, He is creation manifest, and yet your insignificance suddenly has significance because He did it all for you! Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Yes, there is a burgeoning awareness that grows with the passage of time, and an ever growing place of unfamiliarity taking the form of a person, because God is much larger than a person, He is creation manifest, and yet your insignificance suddenly has significance because He did it all for you! Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Roy, blessings always back to you and yours, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my Faith poem.
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Most welcome
Comment from RGstar
This is on the borders of six stars. A little tidying up...ellipses three dots only...capital after full stop if using etc, but what cannot be denied is the exceptional free verse on offer.
Very well done...well formulated, and if the book is as good as this, I wish you good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This is on the borders of six stars. A little tidying up...ellipses three dots only...capital after full stop if using etc, but what cannot be denied is the exceptional free verse on offer.
Very well done...well formulated, and if the book is as good as this, I wish you good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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RGStar, thank you kind sir! I have gained anew awareness in your comments about the correct use of ellipses. I am very grateful and have cleaned up this Faith poem.
Comment from karenina
Such a soul stirring poem. A message of hope to all of us who have wandered far afield from God's love for us. We have only to be still, to open our hearts and call out and we will be embraced in eternal love and salvation!--Karenina
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Such a soul stirring poem. A message of hope to all of us who have wandered far afield from God's love for us. We have only to be still, to open our hearts and call out and we will be embraced in eternal love and salvation!--Karenina
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Karenina, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my Faith peom.
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Thank you for writing it. Only the Lord knows how many souls you've touched!--Karenina
Comment from robyn corum
JLR,
The teaching in the Bible is quite clear. Each of us has an angel - at least one and maybe more - anxious to care for us and keep us from harm. That has to be why humans can live so long. *smile* Thanks!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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JLR,
The teaching in the Bible is quite clear. Each of us has an angel - at least one and maybe more - anxious to care for us and keep us from harm. That has to be why humans can live so long. *smile* Thanks!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Robyn, i am always very grateful for the time you take to read and comment on my poems. I hold you in good thoughts for the Highest and Best always to be at your doorstep.
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
The words and artwork match well. The dove shows the arms open wide of angels and God and the Holy Spirit. This poem asks the question we all ask. Why are we here. I like how the last stanza sums up the poem by rephrasing parts. It also shows the true spring of inspriration.
Good luck, keep writing, and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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JLR,
The words and artwork match well. The dove shows the arms open wide of angels and God and the Holy Spirit. This poem asks the question we all ask. Why are we here. I like how the last stanza sums up the poem by rephrasing parts. It also shows the true spring of inspriration.
Good luck, keep writing, and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Joan, I always send thanks to you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems.
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Don't mention it, JLR
Joan
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your free verse spiritual poem. Your message is a testament to your faith. It flows well with testimonies and your artwork choice goes well with your words. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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I enjoyed reading your free verse spiritual poem. Your message is a testament to your faith. It flows well with testimonies and your artwork choice goes well with your words. Best wishes!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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angel, thank you very much for the good wishes.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
That our Guardian Angel is asked and accepts God's will that we be in it's presence for eternity, and the thought that it has waited for us to light, guard, rule, and guide us in life, is a wondrous all engulfing love. Very well stated in this poem. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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That our Guardian Angel is asked and accepts God's will that we be in it's presence for eternity, and the thought that it has waited for us to light, guard, rule, and guide us in life, is a wondrous all engulfing love. Very well stated in this poem. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Giovanni - grazie mille amico mio!