Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. Lovers do quarrel. It is common and sometimes it is a good thing. It reduces tension and helps them to understand each other better. Glad they in the end embraced each other.
You did a good job with rhyming and syllable counts.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Yes. Lovers do quarrel. It is common and sometimes it is a good thing. It reduces tension and helps them to understand each other better. Glad they in the end embraced each other.
You did a good job with rhyming and syllable counts.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Hi Lisa, thank you so much! I hope that your day has been going smashingly well. Will you be joining Jims Sonnet class in January?
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Yes. It was my suggestion for him to teach a Sonnet class. I really want to learn how to write Sonnet.
I will be in Mexico for a few weeks but I can attend the class from there.
How about you?
Hope you are getting better with your health.
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Thanks Lisa, yes I intend to successfully attend this next class, I have the surgery this week, Thursday and all will be well! 2021 is going to be a banner year of good health and good cheer!
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Good luck with your surgery. We all hope 2021 will be a better year for everyone.
See you in class.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is one of the best Nonets I've read my friend.
Within such a limited and rigid form, you've turned out something that simply flows down the screen while delivering its lament and incorporating some of the old English. No mean feat! But what a wonderful result.
And yes, what is there for this couple if they can't put aside their differences and subdue their fears?
Good luck in the contest xooxoxox
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This is one of the best Nonets I've read my friend.
Within such a limited and rigid form, you've turned out something that simply flows down the screen while delivering its lament and incorporating some of the old English. No mean feat! But what a wonderful result.
And yes, what is there for this couple if they can't put aside their differences and subdue their fears?
Good luck in the contest xooxoxox
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Gypsymooncat, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this minute poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lover's Quarrel
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the Minute contest. I am wire people who can write in rhyme, I can't. I do better with free verse and haiku. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Lover's Quarrel
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the Minute contest. I am wire people who can write in rhyme, I can't. I do better with free verse and haiku. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you, I took the FS meter class, it added a whole new dimension to m otherwise Free Verse poetry. the cost is minimal the teacher is brilliant.
Comment from robyn corum
JLR,
This is the state of affairs with too many couples. No one wants to chance admitting they might have been in the wrong. I just have a text convo about that this morning. If one person in the pair needs to WIN an argument, that means the other must LOSE. We should never want that. Each argument should be about helping reach a better relationship - not winning and losing. Thanks!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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JLR,
This is the state of affairs with too many couples. No one wants to chance admitting they might have been in the wrong. I just have a text convo about that this morning. If one person in the pair needs to WIN an argument, that means the other must LOSE. We should never want that. Each argument should be about helping reach a better relationship - not winning and losing. Thanks!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Robyn thank you for your comments, I certainly agree.
Comment from Susan Larson
What a delightful thought provoking read and skillful resent action of this entry format. Also, a elk chosen picture to accompany your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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What a delightful thought provoking read and skillful resent action of this entry format. Also, a elk chosen picture to accompany your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Susan thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about a lover's quarrel that always end up in heartache for one nor both lovers all because of a misunderstanding or lack of communication.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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A very well-written minute poem about a lover's quarrel that always end up in heartache for one nor both lovers all because of a misunderstanding or lack of communication.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Sandra, thank you! I appreciate the validation on this, my first successful iambic metered minute poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very elegant poem, and I liked your use of archaic language. Stunning artwork which compliments the piece greatly. This should do extremely well in the contest - good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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This is a very elegant poem, and I liked your use of archaic language. Stunning artwork which compliments the piece greatly. This should do extremely well in the contest - good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Eternal Muse thank you for this compliment and good wishes.
Comment from lyenochka
A fun minute poem and yes, the only way that the couples can overcome is to forgive and reconcile. Great use of the form and my favorite stanza was the second one. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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A fun minute poem and yes, the only way that the couples can overcome is to forgive and reconcile. Great use of the form and my favorite stanza was the second one. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you much! This is my first successful iambic meter poem A keeper for me!
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent Minute poem for the contest.
Perfect form for this "Lover's Quarrel".
The rhyme and meter does well for a he said -she said verse.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Excellent Minute poem for the contest.
Perfect form for this "Lover's Quarrel".
The rhyme and meter does well for a he said -she said verse.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Janet, thank you, this is a keeper for me, my very first fully iambic metered success. The class on meter helped me much!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. A very well written poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. A very well written poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you Raul,
have a splendid weekend.
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You're welcome. Same to you! :)