Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Now, now, you very clever short story writer.
A mid night assassin that is attacked by ninja beavers...
Now that took a bite out of crime for that evening.
But hey I like this murderous "beaver tale".
Great job.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thank you for the great review, Sammielwf. Yeah, I wanted to end this with something ridiculous so it was ninja beavers. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night.

=]

Ron

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Hahaha... I love your beaver bodyguards. I bet Adele was a smart Democrat - on the ball with any kidnap or assassination attempts. Very Important People never like to get their own hands dirty.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020

lol, yeah she had them trained well. Haha. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. I hope everything's good in your corner of the world. Have yourself a great day.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

Well, this certainly had a surprise twist in the end! Great picture and a fun story to go with it. Nicely done and I wish you the best in the upcoming contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020

Thank you for the great review, equestrik. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. I hope you have a great day.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Silly and because of that it is very funny. Maybe humor fiction or satire.

This will be a strong entry.

notes:


he wondered to himself why [did] this high-profile woman had such little security

- feels like it is missing a word

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020

Thank you for the great review and suggestion, Lancellot. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.