Comment from
Anne Johnston
A great poem about Christmas and how it centres around family. I like that you included the Lord in your verse. Truly He is the centre of Christmas.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
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Comment from
lori sue weniger
There are some good thoughts about unity and family and the fun and memories made together. It was difficult for me to read and feel the sense of this within the poem as the rhyming within the poem did not flow smoothly. This caused me to continually reread the poem attempting to hear the rhyme and lose focus on your Christmas thoughts of family gatherings.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
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