Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from sammielwf
JLR...
Your poem Christmas Morn is like a gift that keeps on giving. All of the joyful traditions you wrote about are so simple and true..leaving only the crumbs on your late night cookie plate- a touch of tasty realism..
I really enjoyed sharing Christmas with you through this poem.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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JLR...
Your poem Christmas Morn is like a gift that keeps on giving. All of the joyful traditions you wrote about are so simple and true..leaving only the crumbs on your late night cookie plate- a touch of tasty realism..
I really enjoyed sharing Christmas with you through this poem.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Sammiewf, thank you so much, we are so fortunate to have these lasting memories and treasures of family times so special.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your couplets are well-written and descriptive--flowing smoothly from the fun elements of the season to the MAIN reason we celebrate, the birth of the Savior.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Your couplets are well-written and descriptive--flowing smoothly from the fun elements of the season to the MAIN reason we celebrate, the birth of the Savior.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Janice, thank you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's sad that many children don't know the story of Christmas, what it represents, and why we celebrate it. Many countries don't believe in it, which is sadder. What I liked about your Christmas poem, was that you did put the true meaning before the gifts under the tree. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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It's sad that many children don't know the story of Christmas, what it represents, and why we celebrate it. Many countries don't believe in it, which is sadder. What I liked about your Christmas poem, was that you did put the true meaning before the gifts under the tree. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Sandra, yes I lament for all those families this holiday season who lost loved ones from a virus of such virulence that it affected many families and may have not had a Christ relationship.
Comment from Eternal Muse
These were such incredible Christmas visuals that I felt I was in that room, with the tree lit, Christmas stockings hanging, and the magic of Christmas in the air. I liked your rhymed couplets and the holiday imagery.
Good luck in the contest, and happy holidays!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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These were such incredible Christmas visuals that I felt I was in that room, with the tree lit, Christmas stockings hanging, and the magic of Christmas in the air. I liked your rhymed couplets and the holiday imagery.
Good luck in the contest, and happy holidays!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Smiling back! MANY HOLIDAY BLESSINGS TO YOU✨🐱💻
Comment from karenina
So beautifully penned...and yet, this year, with Covid keeping up from such traditions, how bittersweet that the very best gift we can give is to maintain separation and not take the chance to make one we love sick...
It is making this a blue Christmas for me, although I am speaking with the grands often...but oh, just my husband and I on Christmas morn! I will be difficult, I know... Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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So beautifully penned...and yet, this year, with Covid keeping up from such traditions, how bittersweet that the very best gift we can give is to maintain separation and not take the chance to make one we love sick...
It is making this a blue Christmas for me, although I am speaking with the grands often...but oh, just my husband and I on Christmas morn! I will be difficult, I know... Karenina
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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We feel your pain, as we too feel the ache of separation.
Comment from amada
A lovely Christmas rhyming poem. Lovely to read. I enjoyed the sweet rhymes that you included, such as stars, and other great words that celebrate this Season. Best luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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A lovely Christmas rhyming poem. Lovely to read. I enjoyed the sweet rhymes that you included, such as stars, and other great words that celebrate this Season. Best luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Julie Sandy
Beautiful poem and what a perfect thing to choose as your favourite part of Christmas. Children truly are everything at Christmas they make it so fun and magical.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Beautiful poem and what a perfect thing to choose as your favourite part of Christmas. Children truly are everything at Christmas they make it so fun and magical.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Julie, thank you!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. It's so exciting for kids on Christmas morning, the gifts and treats from Santa. It is more important is the spirit gift.
Well done.
Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Yes. It's so exciting for kids on Christmas morning, the gifts and treats from Santa. It is more important is the spirit gift.
Well done.
Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thanks much Lisa!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful poem about what is the best part of Christmas....family. Of course the decorations and presents are great, but without family they mean nothing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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This is a wonderful poem about what is the best part of Christmas....family. Of course the decorations and presents are great, but without family they mean nothing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from royowen
This is a great Christmas poetry excellent rhyme in couplets mainly, articulate and the language is perfect, great descriptive imagery, all those wonderful scenes in the classical sense of the season, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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This is a great Christmas poetry excellent rhyme in couplets mainly, articulate and the language is perfect, great descriptive imagery, all those wonderful scenes in the classical sense of the season, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you.
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Well done