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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020

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Musings of an old man -2020

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Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, an understandably sad time - is it possible for you to Zoom with them all? Many of the traditions have been set in place to bring delight to children. They are however always in our hearts and for the moment we need to find other ways to share the love.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Wendy, yes we will zoom, all the families together --the big loss is that this grandpa is such a hugger, that is what is the biggest loss.
reply by Wendy G on 24-Dec-2020
    Yes I understand. And nothing can replace a wonderful meaningful hug.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Bedecked, but for Naught', is an extremely well-written and heart- wrenching piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Thank you Duchess, Happy Yuletide this Christmas eve day....
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 25-Dec-2020

    JLR,
    You're very welcome. Did Santa bring you anything?
    the Duchess :)))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Bedecked, But For Naught
by JLR

Wonderful club entry for the "Merry Christmas" event in "Picture This" challenge. I understand how you feel. I can't see my adult children and granddaughters. It's very hard but we must stay safe. Next year will be better. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Gypsy Blue Rose I feel the tug of the lost hugs.May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Your Christmas spirit is emanating from every line. There is magic in the air; the visuals are so great, I imagine myself in that living room, in front of a glittering tree, inhaling the aroma of Christmas.

Excellent response to the club's challenge. Happy Holidays!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Eternal Muse, May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
Comment from Boogienights
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It's a Christmas we'll all remember, and it's sad not to be together, but it's for the best. I'm so thankful to be alive right now, and know that better times are coming. Thanks for sharing what many are feeling. :)

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Boogienights, the fact that is overlooked is that YES are still alive! That in and of itself is a blessing among many. May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is a poignant poem. Many readers will sadly, identify with your grieving. This year will definitely feel emptier this year. Many feelings will be felt by your readers, probably as many as there are people. Thank you.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
    Liz, your reviews and comments throughout the year have been like a salve on a wound. May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
reply by Liz O'Neill on 24-Dec-2020
    You are very welcome. Thank you for words of appreciaton.
Comment from RetroStarfish
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Nicely done. You've captured the spirit of this 2020 Christmas: all dressed up and no place to go (or receive!) We're all left with nothing to do but "reminisce of memories that flare."
I'm glad you've taken up writing.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you may your Holidays bring good cheer.Thanks for the time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from nedgarcss
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A great way to run through the list of what all we do at Christmas and then to end with the emphasis on just the two of you and no grandchildren. What a difference that makes to the joy of Christmas! Good writing!
Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Nancy, yep...zoom just doesn?t do it....I am a hugger by nature and missing the kids hugs is the worst loss of all.
Comment from greyson ernst
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this is really really good i love it and the picture is perfect picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    See you on FS in 2021 thanks!
Comment from robyn corum
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JLR,

OH, NO! That would be a tragedy. For sure! The rest of the poem set such a sweet and nostalgic mood... I was not ready for the closing! But the poem was well done anyway. Please send this to the fam away?

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Oh we will have our zoom share. 🙏❤️