Night Birds Sing
Possibilities for my personal growth32 total reviews
Comment from Frances Jean
I enjoyed reading this piece Jesse. It's got a very positive lilt. The picture suits it perfectly. When we go the the River Murray, about 2 or 3 hours from home, it is so peaceful and beautiful. The birds raise their voices every morning just like yours. Cheers Franky
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed reading this piece Jesse. It's got a very positive lilt. The picture suits it perfectly. When we go the the River Murray, about 2 or 3 hours from home, it is so peaceful and beautiful. The birds raise their voices every morning just like yours. Cheers Franky
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Franky, for this surprising review. I didn't expect to read a review today and, it is a pleasant undertaking to reply to it. I am happy you enjoyed reading this prose piece. River Murray sounds lovely and a peaceful place to visit. Hearing birds singing is always a real treat. Since I have insomnia, I get up very early...last night, I had three hours of sleep. My doctor is researching what medication to give me to help with this problem. In the meantime, I spend hours on Fan Story and writing new prose pieces to post. I have fun, so it isn't that bad.
Have a wonderful upcoming week!
Jesse
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You too Jesse. Take care
Comment from fretless
God! This poem Is so touching. It moved me. It really did. You will be up walking with those sticks soon. I am going to pray for you and my prayers are heard. I am going to intercede for you and send god a message. Its time for you to walk.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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God! This poem Is so touching. It moved me. It really did. You will be up walking with those sticks soon. I am going to pray for you and my prayers are heard. I am going to intercede for you and send god a message. Its time for you to walk.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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This review has moved and touched me as well. I am grateful for your generosity in giving me six stars for this post. I am at a loss for words on what to say regarding your selfless act of praying for me to walk again. All I can say is thank you so much.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
The beginning shows your love of and the joy and inspiration you get from nature. A new day dawning always is a sign of hope. I hope that you will be able to use those walking sticks soon too.
One possible edit. I don't think you can listen to sights of sunrise as your compound sentence infers. I think maybe you should add watch the before sights.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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The beginning shows your love of and the joy and inspiration you get from nature. A new day dawning always is a sign of hope. I hope that you will be able to use those walking sticks soon too.
One possible edit. I don't think you can listen to sights of sunrise as your compound sentence infers. I think maybe you should add watch the before sights.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Yes, I have hope, and I will be using those walking sticks as soon as possible.
As far as your suggestion is concerned, I have considered it, thoughtfully, and decided to keep it the same way.
I shall keep writing and continue to stay as healthy as I can.
Have a great day,
Jesse
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Jesse,
Hope is always good. Thanks for the thoughtful consideration. Always you're choice
You're welcome
Joan
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have a very positive and optimistic attitude. I like these words:
"Oh, the majesty at the coming of a brand new day!
With it, comes the possibilities for adventure and dreams fulfilled!" I hope you soon are able to walk those trails.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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You have a very positive and optimistic attitude. I like these words:
"Oh, the majesty at the coming of a brand new day!
With it, comes the possibilities for adventure and dreams fulfilled!" I hope you soon are able to walk those trails.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Anne, for seeing my positivities at play. Thank you, also, for choosing your favorite passage in the prose piece. It feels good to know that I have a bright future ahead of me!
I appreciate your kind comments very much.
Have a great afternoon,
Jesse
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You are welcome
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a wonderful story of hope and the beauty of the morning sounds of nature as birds welcome the morning.
In your writing, I also see your remarkable strength and determination.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck to you.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This is a wonderful story of hope and the beauty of the morning sounds of nature as birds welcome the morning.
In your writing, I also see your remarkable strength and determination.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck to you.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Mary, for your encouraging review. I love your interpretation of how it is to welcome the coming dawn.
I wish you good luck as well.
Have a good afternoon,
Jesse
Comment from amahra
I live in the city now; birds and other nature songs must compete with roaring Harleys, cars, and Eight-wheelers. But your writing gave me fond memories of my childhood waking up to the morning bird songs. I must say, once last week. around 4 am, as few cars crept by, a single gull sang a melody. I peep through the bedroom curtains a watched him for a while. Thanks for the memories.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I live in the city now; birds and other nature songs must compete with roaring Harleys, cars, and Eight-wheelers. But your writing gave me fond memories of my childhood waking up to the morning bird songs. I must say, once last week. around 4 am, as few cars crept by, a single gull sang a melody. I peep through the bedroom curtains a watched him for a while. Thanks for the memories.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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You're welcome for the memories, Amahra.
I grew up in the suburbs of So Cal, right next to the 405 freeway, and it roared traffic nearly all the time...but in the wee early hours of the morning, I could hear a few birds singing their songs to beat the band! Thank you for the memories of my childhood. I appreciate you sharing your story.
Have a great afternoon,
Jesse
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am an early riser and love sitting out side on my back porch with a cup of tea and listen as the birds wake up. It's a wonderful sound. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I am an early riser and love sitting out side on my back porch with a cup of tea and listen as the birds wake up. It's a wonderful sound. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I love your share as well, Barbara. It sounds wonderful to sit on a porch listening to the birds while sipping tea.
I appreciate the excellent rating and the share very much.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from Dilettante junior
Dear James,
Sorry was away, missed a few. What a lovely prose piece! I find your depiction of the bird sounds real. Indeed, you are so right to stress other senses sharpen once one of them dulls in a magical way to compensate..I so wish for you to be up and about in no time.
Heartfelt,
Well done,
DJ
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Dear James,
Sorry was away, missed a few. What a lovely prose piece! I find your depiction of the bird sounds real. Indeed, you are so right to stress other senses sharpen once one of them dulls in a magical way to compensate..I so wish for you to be up and about in no time.
Heartfelt,
Well done,
DJ
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review. The choices you made for parts that spoke to you are right on! Most everybody commented on the bird sounds and the coming of a new dawn. You include my hearing compensating for my eyesight declining is so true! I appreciate your kind comments and your sincerity very much.
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
James (Jesse)
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You are welcome. I pray you get better and start walking in no time my friend. Take it one day at a time... and the rest will follow.
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Thank you for your inspiring encouragement. I hope you are right, and the rest will follow.
Have a nice day,
Jesse
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so happy to read you good news that you'll be using a walker and walking sticks soon! I loved your description of the bird songs that you hear every morning. You love of nature really does shine through!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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I'm so happy to read you good news that you'll be using a walker and walking sticks soon! I loved your description of the bird songs that you hear every morning. You love of nature really does shine through!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Helen, for your encouraging comments. I hope to get out of this wheelchair soon and on to walking!
I am glad you say that my love of nature shines through. I intended to show that and, I am happy I was successful.
Have a beautiful rest of your week,
Jesse
Comment from mermaids
Nature is also a big part of my own self improvement journey. Nature has so much to offer and your descriptive words show how the sounds of the birds are soothing and are a great way to begin the day. Excellent essay that encourages the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Nature is also a big part of my own self improvement journey. Nature has so much to offer and your descriptive words show how the sounds of the birds are soothing and are a great way to begin the day. Excellent essay that encourages the reader.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review. Nature is soothing and comforting in times of stress and is a great way to start your day! I think we both agree on this one. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
Have a great Sunday,
Jesse