Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 18"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
19 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is another great chapter. I do not seen any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day. Yadda, Yadda, Yadda, Yadda.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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This is another great chapter. I do not seen any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day. Yadda, Yadda, Yadda, Yadda.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I'll just say thank you for catching up with all of them. It takes a lot of time and I truly appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Twins? All signs point to that! (was it St. Frances Covenant....or convent?)
Sophia. A big part of the story if she's living a life of luxury!
Whatever will be found in the Cranston papers?
Still anticipating your magic, getting Cassidy out of prison!
A well written transitional chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Twins? All signs point to that! (was it St. Frances Covenant....or convent?)
Sophia. A big part of the story if she's living a life of luxury!
Whatever will be found in the Cranston papers?
Still anticipating your magic, getting Cassidy out of prison!
A well written transitional chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Drama and Suspense....aren't they grand.... especially when the pen is in my hand and I can do as I wish.
Smiles, Carol
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So nice to be able to orchestrate the fate!
Karenina
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well, it seems Allie and Cassidy have survived that terrible attack. The conversation Liz and Hank are having hints at some mysterious coincidence that she alludes to. The fact that her birthday is on the same day as Faith's and that they were both adopted, may become less of a mystery as the story unfolds.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Well, it seems Allie and Cassidy have survived that terrible attack. The conversation Liz and Hank are having hints at some mysterious coincidence that she alludes to. The fact that her birthday is on the same day as Faith's and that they were both adopted, may become less of a mystery as the story unfolds.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Good detective work, Ralf. Made me thing of Bob... Hope you are doing okay and his family too. I always keep wondering what he would be saying about how the story is progressing.
Smiles, Carol
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You must be reading my mind. I miss is reviews and everything I write has me thinking, what would Bob say about this. He was such a presence. Carol, are you going to add a chapter to the book "Memories of Mastery?" I hope so.
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Oh my, I guess I thought I had already done something... between Karenina and Bob.... I know I was worried because I don;t write my thoughts in poems... but a story of some kind would be good. I will take a look at his book and see how everyone else is doing it
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I am grateful. Thanks, Carol.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Another great chapter, as Liz comes to terms with her husband Jack's unfinished business, and the personal information he felt would be best kept quiet. There's a lot more to Sonia Sanchez than is apparent, but I guess that will come out later.
I didn't find any errors.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Another great chapter, as Liz comes to terms with her husband Jack's unfinished business, and the personal information he felt would be best kept quiet. There's a lot more to Sonia Sanchez than is apparent, but I guess that will come out later.
I didn't find any errors.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
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Yes, Sofia Sanchez has her secrets and they affect so many. Thank you for your review and always for the support.
Smiles, Carol
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You're very welcome, as always. Yes, I think you've just begun to scratch the surface of Sofia's involvement.
Love and prayers, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am slowly getting the hang of the story. The characters are not so confusing now. The story flows so well. I like the many phrases you use in the dialogues. Thank yo for sharing. There is an element of mystery I reckon!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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I am slowly getting the hang of the story. The characters are not so confusing now. The story flows so well. I like the many phrases you use in the dialogues. Thank yo for sharing. There is an element of mystery I reckon!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Here's a quick shot of what's been happening....
There are a lot of plots within the story... Mary(RN) was pregnant and living on the streets. She was told her boyfriend Jon was killed in an accident, and the family moved to Italy. He was very much alive and forced to become a priest. He is a weak person and has succumbed to some evil people. Cassidy is his sister and worked for Mason (the evil guy in town). She was accused of murder falsely, and then they attempted to kill her in prison to shut her up.
Liz's husband died in a suspicious plane crash. Hank (a retired detective turned PI) was her husband's best friend.
Garth is an undercover FBI agent working on a drug case. (This is my third sequel with Hank and Garth)
Cynthia is a neighbor. Michael is her nephew. They have found a map and letter indicating gold on Liz's property.
Mason owns a casino, but is involved in smuggling, drugs, and so much more, including murder.
Allie is Liz's best friend and went undercover in prison to watch over Cassidy. They both got stabbed and hospitalized.
There's a quick shot of the last 19 chapters to catch you up just a little. LOL
Hope that helps you out!! Smiles, Carol
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Wow! Thanks very much! The story so far in a nutshell! Very helpful indeed! Great, !
Comment from Judy Lawless
This another excellent chapter, Carol. It's nice to have these quiet, catching-up pieces to break the tension. Well done.
One spag: "Liz shooked(shook) her head and then continued"
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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This another excellent chapter, Carol. It's nice to have these quiet, catching-up pieces to break the tension. Well done.
One spag: "Liz shooked(shook) her head and then continued"
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much Judy...Hope you are still having a great time with the family. Take care...Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting relationship between Faith and Liz! There's more to that, I'm guessing. This is a calmer chapter -- I feel like I had a chance to catch my breath. LOL! Another good write. Looking forward to the next segment. Hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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An interesting relationship between Faith and Liz! There's more to that, I'm guessing. This is a calmer chapter -- I feel like I had a chance to catch my breath. LOL! Another good write. Looking forward to the next segment. Hugs!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thanks Carol... Faith and Liz haven't met yet and Faith doesn't even know she exists so it should be interesting. This was a breather chapter. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
They are twins!!!! What a shock that will be when they both find out! (I'm guessing all this, but your clues did rather tell me that, lol) Obviously the Cranstons only adopted Faith because Liz was a sickly child and they thought she might not make it. Have I got it right? I loved this part, and now I want to find out the truth. Well done, my clever authoress! Lots of love and hugs. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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They are twins!!!! What a shock that will be when they both find out! (I'm guessing all this, but your clues did rather tell me that, lol) Obviously the Cranstons only adopted Faith because Liz was a sickly child and they thought she might not make it. Have I got it right? I loved this part, and now I want to find out the truth. Well done, my clever authoress! Lots of love and hugs. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Did the twin die...Mary thinks so! I love the detective itching to know what's happening.... Chap 19 is posted and if I ever get the reviews answered 20 will be on it's way. The story is owning me again. LOL
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from ShirleyT1
You are such a great writer. Your chapters just flow so well with your well-written words. The dialogue between your well developed characters is natural and balanced. I enjoy every chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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You are such a great writer. Your chapters just flow so well with your well-written words. The dialogue between your well developed characters is natural and balanced. I enjoy every chapter.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the thoughtfulness and your generous praise of my work. Made my day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Wait - so if Faith and Liz had the same birthday, couldn't they possibly be twin sisters? I guess that's the hint you're giving us. And then you keep hinting at a conversation with Darryl. He was wanting to talk with Liz when they were hurrying to the hospital and he talked with her just as she returned. But I bet it's something important that you're leaving us to learn about later...
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Wait - so if Faith and Liz had the same birthday, couldn't they possibly be twin sisters? I guess that's the hint you're giving us. And then you keep hinting at a conversation with Darryl. He was wanting to talk with Liz when they were hurrying to the hospital and he talked with her just as she returned. But I bet it's something important that you're leaving us to learn about later...
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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I'll never tell....Glad you are enjoying the story and I can keep you guessing.
Smiles, Carol