Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 57"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
19 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was a good chapter. I guess Sofia's guilt plus her superstitions worked well. The , "I'll take you there." is a bit of classic move. They never just write down directions. But, it keeps things moving, plus adds content. It also gives her a chance to change her mind. Fear only lasts so long.
Fine work.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Well, that was a good chapter. I guess Sofia's guilt plus her superstitions worked well. The , "I'll take you there." is a bit of classic move. They never just write down directions. But, it keeps things moving, plus adds content. It also gives her a chance to change her mind. Fear only lasts so long.
Fine work.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the review...Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I stay as far away from voodoo as I can get, but I guess that in this case, the end justifies the means, with Annie's life hanging in the balance ... and Cassidy's acting experience came in very handy.
Just a couple of suggestions:
The Hayden sheriff's department was a small but complex facility.
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The Hayden Sheriff's Department was a small but complex facility.
"No, no, senora, I do not know where Miguel is.
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"No, no, Senora, I do not know where Miguel is.
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Sofia, who doesn't elicit much sympathy, will eventually realize that she's been tricked, and that Cassidy is just as alive as she is (no thanks to her).
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I stay as far away from voodoo as I can get, but I guess that in this case, the end justifies the means, with Annie's life hanging in the balance ... and Cassidy's acting experience came in very handy.
Just a couple of suggestions:
The Hayden sheriff's department was a small but complex facility.
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The Hayden Sheriff's Department was a small but complex facility.
"No, no, senora, I do not know where Miguel is.
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"No, no, Senora, I do not know where Miguel is.
***
Sofia, who doesn't elicit much sympathy, will eventually realize that she's been tricked, and that Cassidy is just as alive as she is (no thanks to her).
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short reply. I thank you and appreciate your continued support all the time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from justafan
I can see I have missed way to much of this wonderful story! I'll have to remedy that.
Well done my friend, well done indeed!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I can see I have missed way to much of this wonderful story! I'll have to remedy that.
Well done my friend, well done indeed!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Missy,
You are awesome. My heart thanks you so much.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Looks like Cassidy deserves an Oscar for all the dramatic acting. Where did the voodoo part come in? Whose bright idea was that?:) The spirits must be scaring off the ladies. and the superstitions. Annie's place is now known. Time to get Miguel. Good going!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Looks like Cassidy deserves an Oscar for all the dramatic acting. Where did the voodoo part come in? Whose bright idea was that?:) The spirits must be scaring off the ladies. and the superstitions. Annie's place is now known. Time to get Miguel. Good going!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short response, but it's all that I can manage at this moment. Thank you so much for continuing to read.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm almost glad this wasn't another emotional chapter. I needed a break over the last few. But I had a tissue waiting just in case. LOL. Thanks for sharing another great chapter.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I'm almost glad this wasn't another emotional chapter. I needed a break over the last few. But I had a tissue waiting just in case. LOL. Thanks for sharing another great chapter.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short response, but it's all that I can manage at this moment. Thank you so much for continuing to read.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
So, hopefully, they will have Miguel if Sophia can show them where this cabin is. I think that's where they are with Annie. I hope they haven't hurt her. Another great chapter.
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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So, hopefully, they will have Miguel if Sophia can show them where this cabin is. I think that's where they are with Annie. I hope they haven't hurt her. Another great chapter.
Patty
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short response, but it's all that I can manage at this moment. Thank you so much for continuing to read.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Hello! Hope you are doing well my friend. I was pleased to see you had posted another chapter! This little voodoo twist was quite unexpected and therefore an intriguing read! Oh, poor Sofia who has now angered the spirits she is so fearful of! You wrote Allie and Cassidy's laughter well...menacing yet perhaps enjoying having the worm turn a bit? Well---yes! We've got to get Annie! Nice job...
Be well.
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Hello! Hope you are doing well my friend. I was pleased to see you had posted another chapter! This little voodoo twist was quite unexpected and therefore an intriguing read! Oh, poor Sofia who has now angered the spirits she is so fearful of! You wrote Allie and Cassidy's laughter well...menacing yet perhaps enjoying having the worm turn a bit? Well---yes! We've got to get Annie! Nice job...
Be well.
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the short response, but it's all that I can manage at this moment. Thank you so much for continuing to read.
Hugs, Carol
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Got it!
Go!
K
Comment from Wendy G
Hopefully they will find the cabin quickly ... Sofia will not be wanting to make a mistake!! Cassidy acts very cleverly playing on Sofia'a superstitions. The interview would have been recorded so Sofia's perjury will be on record. Well written chapter!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Hopefully they will find the cabin quickly ... Sofia will not be wanting to make a mistake!! Cassidy acts very cleverly playing on Sofia'a superstitions. The interview would have been recorded so Sofia's perjury will be on record. Well written chapter!!
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all lI can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
So now, Cassidy has appeared before Sofia, who thinks she is a spirit come to avenge herself of the lies that Sofia told at the trial, but she doesn't exactly know where the cabin is, nor where Miguel is just at this moment, so the hand of the law is slowly closing on the whole thing. Did you get my answer to your query concerning Kaytlin? Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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So now, Cassidy has appeared before Sofia, who thinks she is a spirit come to avenge herself of the lies that Sofia told at the trial, but she doesn't exactly know where the cabin is, nor where Miguel is just at this moment, so the hand of the law is slowly closing on the whole thing. Did you get my answer to your query concerning Kaytlin? Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all lI can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great job on this chapter! The acting by Cassidy is well written and humorous. So glad you had her jump into character like that. I hope Sofia gets the men to the cabin in time to rescue Annie. Well done. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Great job on this chapter! The acting by Cassidy is well written and humorous. So glad you had her jump into character like that. I hope Sofia gets the men to the cabin in time to rescue Annie. Well done. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all lI can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol