The Pretty Kitty
The City Kitty20 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
My favorite verses: ""How can I be a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty in a big city like McVitty with a big sister that calls me 'Sassy cat,' if I do not have a pretty itty bitty kitty cat hat?" Sissy asked."
This is brilliant and entertaining. You've done everything probably every reader wished they could. And you threw in some alliteration. A+
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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My favorite verses: ""How can I be a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty in a big city like McVitty with a big sister that calls me 'Sassy cat,' if I do not have a pretty itty bitty kitty cat hat?" Sissy asked."
This is brilliant and entertaining. You've done everything probably every reader wished they could. And you threw in some alliteration. A+
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thanks, Liz! It was fun writing it! I'm feeling a bit better. Hope to review your work soon!
Tina
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I'm glad you are feeling better i just have recently discovered a wonderful little series of videos it comes on well sometimes it's on the the i don't know film of some sort little film and it's about cat a cat that talks is so funny. It reminded me that I've always talked for my own cat like I can't comes in and I so you're so you want a little treat and then the cat says of course I want a little treat and I have been changing the voice just like that. The short clip story is so funny. it is Penny the talking cat on you tube. One of my former coworkers sends me one or two every week it's just hilarious. I know you would enjoy it.
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your runaway win with this entertaining entry! Repetition is a proven strategy to get kids to remember, so your story is a great way to get phoneme variations noticed... as well as providing a tongue-twister challenge for parents reading this aloud to children.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Congratulations on your runaway win with this entertaining entry! Repetition is a proven strategy to get kids to remember, so your story is a great way to get phoneme variations noticed... as well as providing a tongue-twister challenge for parents reading this aloud to children.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Yes, it did turn out to be a bit of a tongue twister! I got carried away,lol! Thank you for this review. I am glad it entertained you:)
Tina
Comment from Patty Palmer
I can't begin to really know how this contest would be like to try and write a story for it. Your story was like reading a tongue twister. I actually read it out loud to try it out as a tongue twister. It worked! My tongue twisted and buckled and I sat here and chuckled! Very entertaining not just for kids but this adult got a thrill out of it. LOL Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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I can't begin to really know how this contest would be like to try and write a story for it. Your story was like reading a tongue twister. I actually read it out loud to try it out as a tongue twister. It worked! My tongue twisted and buckled and I sat here and chuckled! Very entertaining not just for kids but this adult got a thrill out of it. LOL Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your rhymed review! I'm glad you had fun with it!
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute, and it certainly meets the requirements for the contest. You may have a winner. I wonder if Sissy could convince my pretty itty bitty kitties to wear their hats! For some reason they don't want to. LOL
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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That's cute, and it certainly meets the requirements for the contest. You may have a winner. I wonder if Sissy could convince my pretty itty bitty kitties to wear their hats! For some reason they don't want to. LOL
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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haha...I will ask her to intervene! Thank you for the review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful story about a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty... it's adorable. The presentation is awesome too. You incorporated phonics into your story. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Great entry for the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Beautiful story about a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty... it's adorable. The presentation is awesome too. You incorporated phonics into your story. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Great entry for the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This was definitely a challenge with the short vowel phonemes of i and a all through the story of cats and their shenanigans! The artwork is fun as is the children's tale about the kitties who want to wear hats in the city!
Thanks for posting this informational story for little children who need help with their vowel sounds!
Happy 2022!
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This was definitely a challenge with the short vowel phonemes of i and a all through the story of cats and their shenanigans! The artwork is fun as is the children's tale about the kitties who want to wear hats in the city!
Thanks for posting this informational story for little children who need help with their vowel sounds!
Happy 2022!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--quite a tongue-twisting tale. Delightful rhyme will surely be a hit--suggestion: print copies with outline of cat for school children to color!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Charming whimsy--quite a tongue-twisting tale. Delightful rhyme will surely be a hit--suggestion: print copies with outline of cat for school children to color!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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I like the suggestion! Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a really cute and well written story you have penned for the challenge. You used very good descriptive words and phonemes. Very sweet picture you chose too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This is a really cute and well written story you have penned for the challenge. You used very good descriptive words and phonemes. Very sweet picture you chose too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from 1Dreamer
Wow, loved this piece and I can hear children giggling as it's read to them. Loved your creativity and the repetition (LOL, made me want to take a breath at the end of reading it). Best wishes for a win!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wow, loved this piece and I can hear children giggling as it's read to them. Loved your creativity and the repetition (LOL, made me want to take a breath at the end of reading it). Best wishes for a win!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! Phonetic rhyming at its best.
I loved the tale which fits the contest well.
The image is delightful and I see young readers having lots of fun with rhyme.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wow! Phonetic rhyming at its best.
I loved the tale which fits the contest well.
The image is delightful and I see young readers having lots of fun with rhyme.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much!