Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Spring Comes"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Thatguypk
A very good example of a well-written acrostic, and more significantly, very fluid and enchanting in its language. I love the spring, and this encapsulates the elements that I most enjoy. Re-birth of nature, and a lightening of ones spirit. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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A very good example of a well-written acrostic, and more significantly, very fluid and enchanting in its language. I love the spring, and this encapsulates the elements that I most enjoy. Re-birth of nature, and a lightening of ones spirit. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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PK thank you so much.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jlr, it's been a while since I've been here reading, writing and reviewing work. It's good to see that you're still here writing. Unfortunately I also entered this contest and now I see I have stiff competition. Good job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Hello Jlr, it's been a while since I've been here reading, writing and reviewing work. It's good to see that you're still here writing. Unfortunately I also entered this contest and now I see I have stiff competition. Good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Good luck is always sent freely and warmly to you, as well! Yours is quite well crafted!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Spring is my favorite time of year. Everything stars life anew. Your writing speaks of a wonderful time of year when everything gets a new lease on life. You talk like 72 is old. You're just a spring chicken. Believe me, all
the spring has left this chicken. Good work, hang in there.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Spring is my favorite time of year. Everything stars life anew. Your writing speaks of a wonderful time of year when everything gets a new lease on life. You talk like 72 is old. You're just a spring chicken. Believe me, all
the spring has left this chicken. Good work, hang in there.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Willie, yes and thanks for the reminder there is a whole lot of life yet to come!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Spring Comes ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
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' Spring Comes ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you much! I trust your week, down under, is going great!
you're welcome. My week under is going great!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are yearning for spring in midwinter and I feel the same as you, and the natural transition from winter to spring seems to be a struggle as winter has a firm grip on the land and sky, but here you made it sounds so easy, love Dolly x
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You are yearning for spring in midwinter and I feel the same as you, and the natural transition from winter to spring seems to be a struggle as winter has a firm grip on the land and sky, but here you made it sounds so easy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your reading and commenting on my effort.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
A very nice job. You put into words a hope and belief in the future. Although it is winter now, you express your belief that spring will indeed come again. Great job on your rhymes, as well.
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A very nice job. You put into words a hope and belief in the future. Although it is winter now, you express your belief that spring will indeed come again. Great job on your rhymes, as well.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
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Monica, thank you!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Spring will soon come. The thought of getting near the end of the month, makes it seem better. So am counting the days until we can hear the birds sing again. Like your poem.
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Spring will soon come. The thought of getting near the end of the month, makes it seem better. So am counting the days until we can hear the birds sing again. Like your poem.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
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Smiling back with gratefullness.
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem for this contest, it should do really well, good luck. I am going to read into a double meaning that you may not have intended. I see the hopefulness of spring as a metaphor that maybe this Covid can be behind us as well. Whether you meant that or not it is very good work!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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An excellent poem for this contest, it should do really well, good luck. I am going to read into a double meaning that you may not have intended. I see the hopefulness of spring as a metaphor that maybe this Covid can be behind us as well. Whether you meant that or not it is very good work!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Terry, the implication, is subtle, but non less accurate and you are the only one who perceived this. I am impressed!
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a great entry for the Acrostic Rhyming contest. I like the picture you have chosen and the words you have chosen to describe winter and the anticipation of spring coming.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is a great entry for the Acrostic Rhyming contest. I like the picture you have chosen and the words you have chosen to describe winter and the anticipation of spring coming.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hello Anne, thank you for the strong validation.
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You are welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your rhyming acrostic is exceptional in every respect--going beyond the prompt requirements. Your descriptions of nature's elements in winter and spring and how they affect our emotions are vivid and moving. Bravo!
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Your rhyming acrostic is exceptional in every respect--going beyond the prompt requirements. Your descriptions of nature's elements in winter and spring and how they affect our emotions are vivid and moving. Bravo!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Janice, thank you for your generous gift of six-stars and equally strong validation on your comments.