Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Kaleidoscope of Color"Musings of an old man - 2022
31 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I loved your interpretation of the image supplied for this event, and particularly liked the words:
a kaleidoscope of color, embowing
sheaths of dazzling lights carries me to the midnight streams,
I find it powerful that the writer sees himself as one of the butterflies.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I loved your interpretation of the image supplied for this event, and particularly liked the words:
a kaleidoscope of color, embowing
sheaths of dazzling lights carries me to the midnight streams,
I find it powerful that the writer sees himself as one of the butterflies.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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You are so very kind! Thank you, Katherine..
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You are so very kind! Thank you, Katherine..
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You draw the reader in to wonder or identify with "Buttered-Ale" I've been told & have the results of mentioning food or drink. Your metaphors and similes enhance the imagery. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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You draw the reader in to wonder or identify with "Buttered-Ale" I've been told & have the results of mentioning food or drink. Your metaphors and similes enhance the imagery. Well expressed.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you Liz.
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***smile***
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Kaleidoscope of Color
by JLR
Great entry for the Club event... Butterfly Dreams. I saw the same picture with another poem, now it makes sense :). The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Kaleidoscope of Color
by JLR
Great entry for the Club event... Butterfly Dreams. I saw the same picture with another poem, now it makes sense :). The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Colleen The Garbanzo Bean
This is a great poem, thank you for sharing! I love how the reader is led to believe this is a drunken, dreamy scene. The metamorphosis is very picturesque; what a beautiful description! The repeating lines at the end are a nice touch to demonstrate the butterfly's new, almost too-good-to-be-true reality.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a great poem, thank you for sharing! I love how the reader is led to believe this is a drunken, dreamy scene. The metamorphosis is very picturesque; what a beautiful description! The repeating lines at the end are a nice touch to demonstrate the butterfly's new, almost too-good-to-be-true reality.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Collen - Wow! Thanks a bunch ... I so appreciate your positive comments, I delight in knowing that this poem spoke to you,
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The artwork is perfect and creates a mood immediately. You did a great job with the prompt. I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry but I like how I felt when I finished .
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The artwork is perfect and creates a mood immediately. You did a great job with the prompt. I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry but I like how I felt when I finished .
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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K.L. Thanks for immersing yourself in my poem.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Picture this club entry, it has nice rhymes and good usage of words. Good job and have a great day!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hello JLR a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Picture this club entry, it has nice rhymes and good usage of words. Good job and have a great day!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you! I trust, wherever you are that the tease of Spring is in your day.
Comment from amahra
Your artwork is stunning. I really like it. The poem was well written and carried a lot of meaning.
Oh, to dream such a dream of such utter freedom!
Oh, to dream such a dream of a butterfly kingdom ... [this is a wonderful couplet]
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Your artwork is stunning. I really like it. The poem was well written and carried a lot of meaning.
Oh, to dream such a dream of such utter freedom!
Oh, to dream such a dream of a butterfly kingdom ... [this is a wonderful couplet]
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I thank you!
Comment from Raul1
It's a well written poem. It is interesting and entertaining. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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It's a well written poem. It is interesting and entertaining. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks Raul!
Comment from Frank Malley
Kaleidoscope of Color" is a skillful poem in free verse that uses an a-b-a-b rhyme scheme to describe a metamorphosis from human into butterfly, and it envisages the delight of flying and living in the currents of sun-warmed atmospheres. A final couplet dreams of such an outcome being possible for a human within a "butterfly kingdom." In its design of four quatrains and a couplet, it is linked to the design of a sonnet, whose three stanza logic and couplet conclusion makes it so satisfying a form.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Kaleidoscope of Color" is a skillful poem in free verse that uses an a-b-a-b rhyme scheme to describe a metamorphosis from human into butterfly, and it envisages the delight of flying and living in the currents of sun-warmed atmospheres. A final couplet dreams of such an outcome being possible for a human within a "butterfly kingdom." In its design of four quatrains and a couplet, it is linked to the design of a sonnet, whose three stanza logic and couplet conclusion makes it so satisfying a form.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Frank thanks for your solid review.
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You're welcome. I'm a junior lepidopterist - I love butterflies.
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Smiling back 👍👍
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a beautiful poem describing what it might be like to become a lovely butterfly and able to freely fly where ever it wants to go. It works well with the contest Butterfly Dreams.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem describing what it might be like to become a lovely butterfly and able to freely fly where ever it wants to go. It works well with the contest Butterfly Dreams.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you Judy
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You're most welcome.