Born Youth
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
This sounds like a very satisfactory progression. The only drawback is that the contest calls for a rhymed poem, and yours is unrhymed. Perhaps you have time to edit it before the deadline.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This sounds like a very satisfactory progression. The only drawback is that the contest calls for a rhymed poem, and yours is unrhymed. Perhaps you have time to edit it before the deadline.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your help! I have made the rhymes. Is it right now?
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Much better.
Comment from Artasylum
Wow, if you have lived a life that was a happy one and lived it to the fullest... you are way ahead of at least 75% of the world with so many us that weave our way through the ups and downs and ups and downs... good look in your contest... now it is on to the future... di
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Wow, if you have lived a life that was a happy one and lived it to the fullest... you are way ahead of at least 75% of the world with so many us that weave our way through the ups and downs and ups and downs... good look in your contest... now it is on to the future... di
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you!