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Rubble

25 syllable poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Eunice Amero
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

War is a sad thing. Especially when you know children have died no chance to have a life. It's so sad. Nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Good job and good luck

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    And again thanks for those 6 shining stars! zanya
reply by Eunice Amero on 17-Mar-2022
    You are very welcome
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Gruesome as this is, it's a too accurate picture of war.Though it is all true, it breaks my heart, and, for me, claims first place in this contest. Good imagery here.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    And thanks again for those 6 bright stars - such sadness in our world.zanya
Comment from Ramona Scarborough
Excellent
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So few words which say so much. The picture was perfect for what you wrote. Unfortunately, also, a current sad situation. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Ramona

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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This is a horrific but true image expressed in only 25 syllables. Congratulations in accomplishing this. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    Thanks for sharing zanya