Two pivotal times
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jesus will come again to reign; will we be ready. I like the theme of your poem. It seems when we write about God and Jesus, it brings much love and understanding to the eye.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Jesus will come again to reign; will we be ready. I like the theme of your poem. It seems when we write about God and Jesus, it brings much love and understanding to the eye.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Rosemary, I do appreciate your thoughts and insights.
Comment from Mia Twysted
A plea sent out in the universe t help us find our way. The world and it's people are lost and are in need of a guiding hand to help us move beyond the petty place we find ourselves at now.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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A plea sent out in the universe t help us find our way. The world and it's people are lost and are in need of a guiding hand to help us move beyond the petty place we find ourselves at now.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Yes, lost, confused and fearful.
Thank you very much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Many thanks for your supportive review. I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an excellent poem for the faith and the hope of every Christian. We know He came because He is in our hearts, and we look forward to His coming again with joy.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent poem for the faith and the hope of every Christian. We know He came because He is in our hearts, and we look forward to His coming again with joy.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Verna. Totally agree, and we look forward to seeing Him as soon as possible.
Comment from jaded831
At first I didn't under stand your poem, you're author's notes cleared everything up. Every word was placed to weave together a poem of hope. Miracles do happen and we need Christ now.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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At first I didn't under stand your poem, you're author's notes cleared everything up. Every word was placed to weave together a poem of hope. Miracles do happen and we need Christ now.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review. I am glad the notes helped.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Thank you for reminding us that life will not go on this way. We are waiting, trying to wait patiently, and things WILL improve. An excellent entry for the 25 syllable writing prompt.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reminding us that life will not go on this way. We are waiting, trying to wait patiently, and things WILL improve. An excellent entry for the 25 syllable writing prompt.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your twenty-five syllable spiritual poem. I like that you note that Jesus' arrival "rearranged our calendar" and that we await His second coming. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Great job with your twenty-five syllable spiritual poem. I like that you note that Jesus' arrival "rearranged our calendar" and that we await His second coming. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much! Lovely review, appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Aman, His teaching was never to bring social, gender or prejudicial change, but to bring the love and grace of God into this world, which, theoretically, would have brought change, but He knew only a few would accept Him. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Aman, His teaching was never to bring social, gender or prejudicial change, but to bring the love and grace of God into this world, which, theoretically, would have brought change, but He knew only a few would accept Him. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your review.
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A pleasure
Comment from in777wr#
This poem is very nice. We do want Him to reign. I believe you only have 24 syllables. The writing prompt calls for exactly 25 syllable. The poem does flows well, and the message is clear.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This poem is very nice. We do want Him to reign. I believe you only have 24 syllables. The writing prompt calls for exactly 25 syllable. The poem does flows well, and the message is clear.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much - I will check it again.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this entry for the contest. Surely the first coming of Jesus did change things. As we see what is happening in our world, and read the scriptures, we know His second coming is soon. Our part is to be ready and waiting to receive Him.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Well done on this entry for the contest. Surely the first coming of Jesus did change things. As we see what is happening in our world, and read the scriptures, we know His second coming is soon. Our part is to be ready and waiting to receive Him.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Exactly right. Thank you for your wise and thoughtful review.
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You are welcome