Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Stems reposed"Musings of an old man - 2022
39 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your minute contest poem is in good form. I enjoyed reading it. The image choice pairs nicely with your words. Your words paint a great image of spring waiting in the wings as winter finally leaves.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Your minute contest poem is in good form. I enjoyed reading it. The image choice pairs nicely with your words. Your words paint a great image of spring waiting in the wings as winter finally leaves.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Jan, thank you,
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem and very well written. I loved the lines
" keep buds heads down
just like a frown "
All the very best to you in the competition.
With regards
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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A beautiful poem and very well written. I loved the lines
" keep buds heads down
just like a frown "
All the very best to you in the competition.
With regards
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Bridge, thank you,
Comment from mermaids
Your words remind me of the daffodil stems popping up in my yard. "Repeats of nature nurture me" is a great line that is so true, the repeating return of nature does indeed nurture me. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Your words remind me of the daffodil stems popping up in my yard. "Repeats of nature nurture me" is a great line that is so true, the repeating return of nature does indeed nurture me. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, that's a beautiful Minute poem. I love your image of crocuses breaking through snow. I remember them in my garden - I called them messengers of spring!
Your visuals are so good that I could almost see those buds in the warm sun. Great imagery and choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Oh, that's a beautiful Minute poem. I love your image of crocuses breaking through snow. I remember them in my garden - I called them messengers of spring!
Your visuals are so good that I could almost see those buds in the warm sun. Great imagery and choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
Thisnicely written minute poem shows how hardy some plants are and that gives us hope that we can live through the coming Winter. This picture can also work with the changing from Winter to Spring with those flowers that sprout even through the last of the snow.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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JLR,
Thisnicely written minute poem shows how hardy some plants are and that gives us hope that we can live through the coming Winter. This picture can also work with the changing from Winter to Spring with those flowers that sprout even through the last of the snow.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi Joan, yes and we are having a tease of spring day this St. Paddies day.
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Yes, we are. I can?t wait to enjoy it after work.
Joan
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms.
Lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
You have beautifully depicted the arrival of Spring and its pleasant side effects.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Good Luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hello JLR,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms.
Lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
You have beautifully depicted the arrival of Spring and its pleasant side effects.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Good Luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thanks friend!
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Minute poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and very nice imagery from the art work. Thank you for putting the directions in your notes. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written Minute poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and very nice imagery from the art work. Thank you for putting the directions in your notes. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you Teri.
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Comment from Raul1
It is a true nature to its word, and it is well written. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No mistakes found in this poem. I like it. Good work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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It is a true nature to its word, and it is well written. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No mistakes found in this poem. I like it. Good work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank yo Raul.
Comment from Aussie
New life huddles beneath the carpet of snow, waiting, waiting for time to show. Sun, life-giver shines through the clouds, encouraging the green to grow. Well done. K xx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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New life huddles beneath the carpet of snow, waiting, waiting for time to show. Sun, life-giver shines through the clouds, encouraging the green to grow. Well done. K xx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Stems reposed', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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'Stems reposed', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi friend, thanks and life is good!
Hi there. You're right. Life is good!