Pirates Treasure
Abecedarian poem6 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
-Very smooth sailing, by a ères and their sip.
-Love the picture of sea blues, accompanying your poem.It paints the scene
-Respect of guidelines,
-Good word choices.
-Can picture treasure troves, adventures non high seas.
-Very well done, good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello,
-Very smooth sailing, by a ères and their sip.
-Love the picture of sea blues, accompanying your poem.It paints the scene
-Respect of guidelines,
-Good word choices.
-Can picture treasure troves, adventures non high seas.
-Very well done, good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from LisaMay
How exciting to dig up buried treasure! I love the illustration, and your choice to centre the lines works well with it to appear like moonlight ripples. Your well crafted words make a story unfold as we read.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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How exciting to dig up buried treasure! I love the illustration, and your choice to centre the lines works well with it to appear like moonlight ripples. Your well crafted words make a story unfold as we read.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from oliver818
This is a really great entry for the competition, I enjoyed it a lot. I love the poetry imagery and you did a great job of using all the letters- these are always harder to do than they look I find. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is a really great entry for the competition, I enjoyed it a lot. I love the poetry imagery and you did a great job of using all the letters- these are always harder to do than they look I find. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. The poem has great mental imagery of the pirate, and his crew. I could see everything you wrote playing out. Very nice picture with this poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This was a well written poem. The poem has great mental imagery of the pirate, and his crew. I could see everything you wrote playing out. Very nice picture with this poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Very nicely done. The flow is good. There is no strain in using the form. The images are clear. The poem stays on point. The language befits the situation.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Very nicely done. The flow is good. There is no strain in using the form. The images are clear. The poem stays on point. The language befits the situation.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You did manage a complete story with the alphabet. I am impressed that you did such a good job and didn't have to create a word for those last letters. Best wishes with your pirate story in the ABC poetry contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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You did manage a complete story with the alphabet. I am impressed that you did such a good job and didn't have to create a word for those last letters. Best wishes with your pirate story in the ABC poetry contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you