Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "A Childs imaginings"Musings of an old man - 2022
16 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a great children's poem JLR and don't all kids love splashing in puddles. Whenever I read children's poems I always imagine the pictures that could go with, and it was easy to do with this one. Colourful scenes you've created in your Cube poem. Cheers.
valda
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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This is a great children's poem JLR and don't all kids love splashing in puddles. Whenever I read children's poems I always imagine the pictures that could go with, and it was easy to do with this one. Colourful scenes you've created in your Cube poem. Cheers.
valda
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Valda thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' a Child's imaginings ', is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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' a Child's imaginings ', is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you friend~
You're very welcome~
Comment from Anne Johnston
The mind of a child listening to a story told or read, imagining all sorts of things. Books can take us to far countries, and to places where anything can happen. Well done on this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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The mind of a child listening to a story told or read, imagining all sorts of things. Books can take us to far countries, and to places where anything can happen. Well done on this poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Anne, thank you. Enjoy your week to the fullest.
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You are welcome
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I like this poem. It paints a very vivid picture of a creative child, just being a child. While kn the other side of the same token, you stay creative about the whole piece. And that's what makes an artist. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I like this poem. It paints a very vivid picture of a creative child, just being a child. While kn the other side of the same token, you stay creative about the whole piece. And that's what makes an artist. Keep Writing
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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thank you for your validation!
Comment from lyenochka
I like the way you formatted this as a progression left to right instead of only up to down. I liked the opening about the child splashing but I wondered what happened at the end because the fairy world ended with "folk tale grumbles" - did it not have a happy ending?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I like the way you formatted this as a progression left to right instead of only up to down. I liked the opening about the child splashing but I wondered what happened at the end because the fairy world ended with "folk tale grumbles" - did it not have a happy ending?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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stormy weather kept the young boy inside with not much room to play. Smiling back ...
Comment from Bridge
A very happy poem. At least it took me to my happy childhood days. A very interesting form. I will give it a try soon. Very well written
With regards
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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A very happy poem. At least it took me to my happy childhood days. A very interesting form. I will give it a try soon. Very well written
With regards
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Bridge, thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This cube poem, A Child's Imaginings, has the proper formatting and gives the readers a sort of book summary as the stanzas cover aspects of this children's fantasy book. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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This cube poem, A Child's Imaginings, has the proper formatting and gives the readers a sort of book summary as the stanzas cover aspects of this children's fantasy book. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you sir!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the content and you painted a wonderful picture for children here. I think the cube poem is written in iambic metre which is missing here, but I still enjoyed it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I love the content and you painted a wonderful picture for children here. I think the cube poem is written in iambic metre which is missing here, but I still enjoyed it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I missed the required iambic meter aspect, but for me the attempt was a good exercise at cracking open my imagination.
Comment from jessizero
This cube poem was adorable. Children have the most creative minds. Some of us never grow out of it! You did a great, creative job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This cube poem was adorable. Children have the most creative minds. Some of us never grow out of it! You did a great, creative job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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it was fun to give it a go.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry, thank you for the exposure. The photo added dimension to your writing as well as the descriptive language used.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry, thank you for the exposure. The photo added dimension to your writing as well as the descriptive language used.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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K.L. While not perfect, did enjoy this first cube experience.