Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a fun poem, I like the use of alliteration throughout. My favorite line is

Oodles of oomph

It's very evocative and almost an onomatopoeia I guess- I can see a guy lugging around huge books or something

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You snagged me here with your acrostic about stories and how cleverly they are created and hold us all in suspense as we read, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated .
With regards