Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Thatguypk
A well-constructed poem for the contest, meeting the criteria. Despite being a non-religious person, I can appreciate when someone writes with a passion about their own faith. Well done.
PK
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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A well-constructed poem for the contest, meeting the criteria. Despite being a non-religious person, I can appreciate when someone writes with a passion about their own faith. Well done.
PK
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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PK thank you for your validation.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I just love spiritual poems, especially when the artist stays within the realm of creativity. It just gives you more feeling to the work. And I appreciate your sharing. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I just love spiritual poems, especially when the artist stays within the realm of creativity. It just gives you more feeling to the work. And I appreciate your sharing. Keep Writing
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I thank you kind Sir! Happy Easter to you and yours.
Comment from E. Denison
Great job with this Joseph's star form poem, mystery writer. All requirements for the form are met, and the timing of a faith based subject is apt, given that we are near to Easter. The image is also uplifting and pairs well with your chosen words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Great job with this Joseph's star form poem, mystery writer. All requirements for the form are met, and the timing of a faith based subject is apt, given that we are near to Easter. The image is also uplifting and pairs well with your chosen words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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E.Denison, thank you for reading and commenting on this Joseph Star poem. I send prayers for the highest and best for your mind, body, and spirit this Holy Season.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your theme it's almost lyrical.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your theme it's almost lyrical.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Gypsy Blue Rose.. thank you for reading and commenting on this Joseph Star poem. I send prayers for the highest and best for your mind, body, and spirit this Holy Season.
Comment from estory
I like the message, and the upbeat tone, the celebratory tone that brings the message. It is in many ways very Psalm like. It could use some more images to brighten it up and give it some shape and color. But the bones of the poem are there. This form has an interesting rhythm and I think you used to it to pretty good effect. estory
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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I like the message, and the upbeat tone, the celebratory tone that brings the message. It is in many ways very Psalm like. It could use some more images to brighten it up and give it some shape and color. But the bones of the poem are there. This form has an interesting rhythm and I think you used to it to pretty good effect. estory
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a great awareness. And I like the picture. And he will come. There is too much going on in this world. God is watching and he does not like what is going on. There are plenty of signs of his coming. Thank you for the great poem.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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This is a great awareness. And I like the picture. And he will come. There is too much going on in this world. God is watching and he does not like what is going on. There are plenty of signs of his coming. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Carolyn, thank you! I am honored... yes there are many indicators that the Way has been made passable ... HAPPY EASTER 🙏🙏
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You are welcome.
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Have a great Easter.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery Poet , a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Joseph's star writing prompt entry, you executed well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Hello mystery Poet , a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Joseph's star writing prompt entry, you executed well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much, Happy Easter!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is wonderful. I love the challenging format here. Your words are meaningful and well placed in this piece. It was enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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This is wonderful. I love the challenging format here. Your words are meaningful and well placed in this piece. It was enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you sir! I value your validation, happy Easter!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Everyone is waiting for Jesus' return. What a wonderful day that will be. But part of me wonders if the sceptics will believe. Will the same thing happen? It does worry me. Well done of this lovely contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Everyone is waiting for Jesus' return. What a wonderful day that will be. But part of me wonders if the sceptics will believe. Will the same thing happen? It does worry me. Well done of this lovely contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Hi Sandra, happy Easter!
Comment from Wendy G
Your words, simply presented, are stark and true, and offer a warning to mankind to prepare and be ready for His return. I like the subtle suggestion of the image, for those in their graves will be raised also. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Your words, simply presented, are stark and true, and offer a warning to mankind to prepare and be ready for His return. I like the subtle suggestion of the image, for those in their graves will be raised also. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Smiling back!