Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Mother Mary's Dream"Musings of an old man - 2022
22 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely spiritual interpretation of this 'dreams ' picture for the club JLR. Well used alliteration adds to this descriptive ottava rima poem. Very well done. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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A lovely spiritual interpretation of this 'dreams ' picture for the club JLR. Well used alliteration adds to this descriptive ottava rima poem. Very well done. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Valda, I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I remember being enthralled with the Timpani drum when I was in high school. You have a plethora of alliteration. If the reader reads this aloud as all poetry should be read, they will get the greatest value of this poem. There is so much more, but this is enough.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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I remember being enthralled with the Timpani drum when I was in high school. You have a plethora of alliteration. If the reader reads this aloud as all poetry should be read, they will get the greatest value of this poem. There is so much more, but this is enough.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Liz, I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you!
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***warm smile***
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Amen, I say, brethren. May this weekend be a way to mourn the death, and celebrate His resurrection by way of bearing testimony which many on FS have done already.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Amen, I say, brethren. May this weekend be a way to mourn the death, and celebrate His resurrection by way of bearing testimony which many on FS have done already.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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HAppy Easter Tom!
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and to you as well.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: excellent witness to the world. Love how Mary dances.
Great control with your rhymes and meter. God's blessing on this
Holy Week of Passover and Good Friday through Resurrection Sunday.
Beautiful. ************ flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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JLR: excellent witness to the world. Love how Mary dances.
Great control with your rhymes and meter. God's blessing on this
Holy Week of Passover and Good Friday through Resurrection Sunday.
Beautiful. ************ flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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thank you very much 🙏🙏🙏 Happy Easter
Comment from karenina
Hello and Happy Easter weekend to you! Thanks for offering the definition for both "nard" and "Kestrel" ~~ I knew neither. I've read several takes on this "Picture this" club entry and yours is as spiritual as I've seen! Especially poignant as I sit and read it on Good Friday. I was struck by the image of Mother Mary dancing with joy, upon learning her beloved son was not, as imagined, destroyed, but given new abundant life ~ for all of us to claim as our own, thanks to his sacrifice. Moving, well-penned, full of grace--
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Hello and Happy Easter weekend to you! Thanks for offering the definition for both "nard" and "Kestrel" ~~ I knew neither. I've read several takes on this "Picture this" club entry and yours is as spiritual as I've seen! Especially poignant as I sit and read it on Good Friday. I was struck by the image of Mother Mary dancing with joy, upon learning her beloved son was not, as imagined, destroyed, but given new abundant life ~ for all of us to claim as our own, thanks to his sacrifice. Moving, well-penned, full of grace--
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Karenina, thank you very much 🙏🙏🙏 Happy Easter!
Comment from mermaids
There is such a beautiful, spiritual feel and flow to your words. We often forget about Mary during this Easter season, she must be full of joy to see her son rise again. I like the image of Mary dancing across the cosmos, excellent use of words and poetic form.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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There is such a beautiful, spiritual feel and flow to your words. We often forget about Mary during this Easter season, she must be full of joy to see her son rise again. I like the image of Mary dancing across the cosmos, excellent use of words and poetic form.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Mermaids, thank you very much 🙏🙏🙏 Happy Easter!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. This is a beautifully written rhyming poem about Easter. I enjoyed reading. I am not a poet, but I would say you nailed this poem.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. This is a beautifully written rhyming poem about Easter. I enjoyed reading. I am not a poet, but I would say you nailed this poem.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Barbara, I delight in your comments. Thank you, Happiest of Easter Weekends.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Mother Mary's Dream ', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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'Mother Mary's Dream ', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Thank Duchess, I appreciate, as always, your review and comments. May your Easter bring you much joy, comfort, and good health!
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JLR, you're welcome. I'm hoping Easter will bring us a hutch full of rabbits 😊😊😊:)))) the Duchess
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Aahh that brings back childhood memories of our little fluffle of bunnies that grew quickly into a colony 😊😊👍👍
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JLR, my white mice did much the same thing 😊😊😊😊 :)))
the Duchess
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Mice will surely do that ... happy, happy Easter!
Mice are so very reliable ... happy happy Easter to you!
Comment from amahra
This seemed a very difficult poem to write, but you aced it. I loved all of the word choices; they made the poem sophisticated as well as stylish. The artwork was fine and very appropriate to the writing. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This seemed a very difficult poem to write, but you aced it. I loved all of the word choices; they made the poem sophisticated as well as stylish. The artwork was fine and very appropriate to the writing. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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amahra, I so, so value your validation of this poem, Happy Easter!
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
This is a nicely metaphoric poem, for the potlatch, about the way we should respond to Holy Week and Easter. Mary constantly dances and rejoices with nature joining in.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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JLR,
This is a nicely metaphoric poem, for the potlatch, about the way we should respond to Holy Week and Easter. Mary constantly dances and rejoices with nature joining in.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Hi Friend I have never met. As is the case always, I value your supportive reviews and comments. Be of great health yourself! JLR
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Hi, JLR. You're welcome.
That's what we're here for.
Joan