Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Bill Schott
This trinet, Why?, has the proper formatting and sends out the plaintive plea to react to the horrors we see happening across the globe.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This trinet, Why?, has the proper formatting and sends out the plaintive plea to react to the horrors we see happening across the globe.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thanks Bill, I trust all is well.
Comment from jaded831
I agree, evil is out of control. I can understand fighting for rights, only peacefully. But attacking without just cause is barbaric. Your poem amplifies the cries of the innocent and the need for peace. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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I agree, evil is out of control. I can understand fighting for rights, only peacefully. But attacking without just cause is barbaric. Your poem amplifies the cries of the innocent and the need for peace. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Trinet poem you have penned about no more war! You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This is a very nice and well written Trinet poem you have penned about no more war! You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Jessa Miller
Wowza. Although relatively little was said, there was a big bang for the buck with the meaning. This is a very impactful piece. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Wowza. Although relatively little was said, there was a big bang for the buck with the meaning. This is a very impactful piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an excellent Trinet. You brought the importance of peace to the forefront. Your description of war as tragic scenes and innocent lives lost is true. The picture fits the poem well.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent Trinet. You brought the importance of peace to the forefront. Your description of war as tragic scenes and innocent lives lost is true. The picture fits the poem well.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Terry Broxson
Looks like a good entry for this writing prompt to me, good luck. Your question about Why war is a good one. I think the answer lies somewhere between human beings having free will and some choosing to exercise that will in evil ways. We need more brave souls to stop them. Good work, Terry.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Looks like a good entry for this writing prompt to me, good luck. Your question about Why war is a good one. I think the answer lies somewhere between human beings having free will and some choosing to exercise that will in evil ways. We need more brave souls to stop them. Good work, Terry.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Trinet writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Your topic is moving and based in true events of the war against Ukrainians. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the Trinet writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Your topic is moving and based in true events of the war against Ukrainians. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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I am grateful for your review. Thank you!
Comment from jaydub99
Well written. I like the tone you created with carefully selected words and a touch of alliterative flair. I had not heard of this type of poem and I think you gave a nice example of it. Powerful piece, I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Well written. I like the tone you created with carefully selected words and a touch of alliterative flair. I had not heard of this type of poem and I think you gave a nice example of it. Powerful piece, I wish you luck.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
The Trinet format seems appropriate to such a theme as yours, when you are challenging and imploring a change of heart about war to protect the innocent. Well presented. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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The Trinet format seems appropriate to such a theme as yours, when you are challenging and imploring a change of heart about war to protect the innocent. Well presented. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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wendy, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No amount of pleading can stop war occurring and all we can do is try and avoid feeling the affects of war. Those who stay in war torn countries are at risk, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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No amount of pleading can stop war occurring and all we can do is try and avoid feeling the affects of war. Those who stay in war torn countries are at risk, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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thanks Dolly.