Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

This was certainly a beautiful Trinet poem of faith. I am sorry I am just reviewing this now, as I read them all and planned on reviewing today, as I was afraid of missing the deadline. As you describe in your poem and this awesome photo,
God shines his light of hope, if we're willing to let Him guide our way.
Lovely poem and messages of hope!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022

---

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022

Thanks for your lovely review!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A wonderful poem and so beautifully written and illustrated in gold letters. A little hint of the golden path perhaps? My vote in this stiff competition.

All my best in the contest,
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thanks for your lovely review and also for your vote - it helped my poem to a win.

reply by Sally Law on 28-Apr-2022

Wonderful! Most deserving of the win! Sal :))

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This trinet, Finding the Path, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to put faith first and keep hope alive going forward. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I cannot disagree with what you write but I wish the media would take this advice and give us the GOOD NEWS day and night but instead the screen is full of fright. And we pay for it every day of our life.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Let God lead us and give us strength, words to live by. Your poem amplifies the power of prayer. We need that today more than ever. Although I do believe the same evil has always been out there, only now with the media we are more aware.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Technically spot on! Poet, constructing a Trinet to deliver a strong poetic feeling is not an easy feat. You have delivered a worthy entry to the contest, and I wish you the best in all future writings.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Fine rhymes and flow here and I enjoyed these few word to praise your faith in a positive and powerful way, I could see the cross here too, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022

---

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022

Thanks Dolly. It seemed obvious to me the form is meant to be arranged in centred lines to show the cross shape.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Nice poem for the prompt entry. Thanks for the note that explained how the trinet is structured and how it takes the form of a cross. Very interesting. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022

---

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022

Thanks for reviewing. It seemed obvious to me the form is meant to be arranged in centred lines to show the cross shape.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Trinet writing prompt entry, you executed it well on the word count. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

falling into the path of your words hope brought the beacon, moulding it into pathway to what really matters in life it draws heaven image to the mind, beautifully painted

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022

---

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review comments - much appreciated.