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Salvation frees

My life seems to have a zillion moving parts at times

4 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Temptation taunts Seductions tease ~Salvation frees~ Maybe 1 and 2 but contrition is needed to have salvation take effect. What I know is the first two are apparently everywhere especially on teevee and in movies. The third available in many churches but attendance is down to 47% of seats filled versus 70% twenty years ago. Which side is winning?

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Christianity is a hard sell these days. Faith is a hard sell.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 23-Apr-2022
    I know why it fails today as in years gone by because when mankind forgets their accomplishments achieved are theirs alone and forget about how gifts are God-given the world spins out of control. Then comes war, destruction, and return to begged for Mercy. Pride goeth before the fall.
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Trying to live by the Bible is not easy but with the help of God it's possible.

The 10 commandments :


You shall have no other gods
before Me. ( I do like the idea of Karma )

You shall not make idols. ( I don't pray in front of a picture or an alter)

You shall not take the name
of the LORD your God in vain. ( this one is a tough one .. Italians swear a lot using also religious terms : Madonna and Dio ..Holy Mary and God)

Remember the Sabbath day,
to keep it holy. ( that s not hard)

Honour your father and your
mother. ( I failed terribly on this one)

You shall not murder ( I can hold to this one)

You shall not committee adultery ( this is easy for me to follow) I have had many crushes on actors but never two at the same time ( biggrin)

But for many this is one of the hardest commandments .. attraction begins with a simple glance .. blinkers would help ( biggrin)

You shall not steal ( I did steal a belt when I was young .. it was a test of courage)

You shall not bear false witness against your neighbour. ( this is not too hard to follow)

You shall not convert ( I had to look what this meant .. I m quite fazed .. don't care a hoot what others have .. my moot is .. there will always be someone that has more than me so what s the use to fret about it and envy .

If we stay strong and on the right path the reward is salvation and eternal life .. that's no small feat , right?

My favourite line is the 4 th.


 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    You are an amazing supportive fanstory friend Franka ? thank you 😊
    Staying strong and maintaining the right path is definitely no small feat. There are so many things tugging at our sleeves attempting to lead us away from that path.
reply by tempeste on 23-Apr-2022
    I enjoy reading your work.

    I like your style .. you do a lot of introspection .. and you ponder about life and the universe etc

    Take care Trask!
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
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Your well written trinet poem addresses the very human struggles of how to live a meaningful life while resisting or avoiding life's temptations. Leading a God-focused life being saved and protected provides maximum armour to free you from sin.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Amen
    Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Truer words were never spoken. The message delivered with these few lines can free the world if understood. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much for your gracious review:)