Lost Child
A 50 word story5 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
well done on your fifty worder. I thought this was pretty funny. It's amazing how quickly our priorities can change. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello Author,
well done on your fifty worder. I thought this was pretty funny. It's amazing how quickly our priorities can change. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards
Comment from JoannaN
It's cute. A little story,with a beginning and ending, everything in such a short piece of text. Well-done job. I wish you best of luck in your contest. Best regards.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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It's cute. A little story,with a beginning and ending, everything in such a short piece of text. Well-done job. I wish you best of luck in your contest. Best regards.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I love it! I'm not sure I've ever heard a toddler say "vanilla", but otherwise I can picture the exact scene playing out in real life. Lovely poetry, thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I love it! I'm not sure I've ever heard a toddler say "vanilla", but otherwise I can picture the exact scene playing out in real life. Lovely poetry, thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you for pointing out the vanilla thing. You are right and I did edit my story. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my stories. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Nice story for fifty words. You have a nice story line, with excitement and drama. I like how you left it on a cliff hanger, so you can build on it later if you want to. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Nice story for fifty words. You have a nice story line, with excitement and drama. I like how you left it on a cliff hanger, so you can build on it later if you want to. Nicely done.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
Although a scary thought, this was also a cute story. I love your ability to paint a picture for your reader in only 50 words. I hope you continue to share you work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello!
Although a scary thought, this was also a cute story. I love your ability to paint a picture for your reader in only 50 words. I hope you continue to share you work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards