Letter to God
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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Good entry in the Dear God Contest. You are indeed making an unselfish request. I hope he answers your request. Since there are so many older members on this site it would be good if you made your font size larger. Perhaps more would engage with your text too.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Good entry in the Dear God Contest. You are indeed making an unselfish request. I hope he answers your request. Since there are so many older members on this site it would be good if you made your font size larger. Perhaps more would engage with your text too.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I have cataracts on both eyes and I am 77. Can't do much about either. Thanks for reading. Blessings, K xx
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Okay, I had no way of knowing.
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I will see (pardon the pun) if I can increase the font. Do you have sight problems?
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Yes, my glasses are quite thick. The easy way to increase the size is as followed: Go to Edit poem. Highlight the entire text. While it is highlighted, press the Ctrl key and the + plus sign key and the text will get larger. If too large highlight again and press Ctrl and the minus -key.
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Now try 'On the sheep's back' tell me if it is too big?
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Not too big for my old eyes with thick glasses. It's perfect!. LOL
Thanks!
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I am so pleased it worked. But for you, I wouldn't have known how to increase it on the site. Blessings, Kay xx
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You are most welcome. Any thing I know I share with others.
Comment from evilynne
A very touching well written entry for this contest. It touches at the heart strings and speaks of a strong relationship with God. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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A very touching well written entry for this contest. It touches at the heart strings and speaks of a strong relationship with God. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Hello Evi, Thanks so much for reading, glad you liked. Blessings, K xx
Comment from royowen
At last, reading something that is asking for nothing more than they already have at their disposal, He is aware of our needs anyway, as I age I'm discovering I'm becoming more dependant, humbly coming before God and Thanking him our future is not only assured but in His trustworthy hands. Beautifully written Kay, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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At last, reading something that is asking for nothing more than they already have at their disposal, He is aware of our needs anyway, as I age I'm discovering I'm becoming more dependant, humbly coming before God and Thanking him our future is not only assured but in His trustworthy hands. Beautifully written Kay, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Hello Roy, Thanks so much for reading; we think alike. God isn't Santa. We ask for others because we can. Bless you, love Kay xx
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Well done Kay
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, your letter my sweet friend broke my heart...
as I still have some of my family alive...the ones
that were regularly around...are the ones that passed..
I think we all need to do more to take care of God's creation...there are times I feel like I missed out on so many things I wish I would have done...
for now I pray things get better...and that He gives me understanding of what is going on around us...
I love your letter to God Kace...it touched my heart...
and Thank You for telling your story told...
I love your stunning picture...God Bless you my wonderful
friend...love you much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Hi Kace, your letter my sweet friend broke my heart...
as I still have some of my family alive...the ones
that were regularly around...are the ones that passed..
I think we all need to do more to take care of God's creation...there are times I feel like I missed out on so many things I wish I would have done...
for now I pray things get better...and that He gives me understanding of what is going on around us...
I love your letter to God Kace...it touched my heart...
and Thank You for telling your story told...
I love your stunning picture...God Bless you my wonderful
friend...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Hello Linda, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. God knows our needs. God isn't Santa. We ask for others to bring them to Jesus.
Bless you popcorn. Love, Kace xx
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your so welcome beautiful you...
love you..XXOO
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to your words here. I can feel your feelings, family has passed on and asking God "what can I do". I like at the end you mention being a witness for Him, the most important thing we can do with our lives regardless of our physical state. Excellent letter to God.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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I can relate to your words here. I can feel your feelings, family has passed on and asking God "what can I do". I like at the end you mention being a witness for Him, the most important thing we can do with our lives regardless of our physical state. Excellent letter to God.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Hello again. Glad you related to my letter to God. The internet has given me a wonderful means of helping people, my physical self isn't doing well, still I can listen. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Teri7
Kay, This is a very beautiful and very heartfelt letter to God. You used great descriptive words from your sweet heart. Just be a light for Jesus in all you say, write and do, even on here. It will touch somebody I truly believe. It touches me I know! love you dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Kay, This is a very beautiful and very heartfelt letter to God. You used great descriptive words from your sweet heart. Just be a light for Jesus in all you say, write and do, even on here. It will touch somebody I truly believe. It touches me I know! love you dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Hello Teri, Yes, we can use the internet to reach people all over the world. Now is the time. So glad you liked my letter. Much love, Kay xx
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the Dear God contest, Kay. I loved the picture and the saying that went with it. This was beautiful and so very inspirational. Blessings.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the Dear God contest, Kay. I loved the picture and the saying that went with it. This was beautiful and so very inspirational. Blessings.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Bless you my friend. God comes first in my life, not religion. Our way of worship is nature; hug a tree, talk to your plants. If you must take a life ask first and thank the animal. Love, Kay xx
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Same here, my friend. You are so very welcome, Kay.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is an interesting letter. It is however either not a script or a poorly constructed script.
As a letter. It is good, but I think you have contradictions in your final paragraph:
You know me and every hair on my head is counted by you.- If He knows all that, do you even have to ask?
I am asking you, what gift can I give mankind that will turn them away from the dark side? - Gift? Do you give one doing dark things a gift to change them?
Time is running out for me, but so many young people dismiss you out of hand. - Why single out young people?
If you could allow me to be a voice for Jesus, I will. - Now, it seems you are answering your own request.
He lay down his life for me, what can I do for Him?
- I thought you wanted to do something to turn mankind from the darkside or be the voice for Jesus.
I would look over that last paragraph, and change this from script to prose, or fix the formatting to one of a script.
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Hmm, this is an interesting letter. It is however either not a script or a poorly constructed script.
As a letter. It is good, but I think you have contradictions in your final paragraph:
You know me and every hair on my head is counted by you.- If He knows all that, do you even have to ask?
I am asking you, what gift can I give mankind that will turn them away from the dark side? - Gift? Do you give one doing dark things a gift to change them?
Time is running out for me, but so many young people dismiss you out of hand. - Why single out young people?
If you could allow me to be a voice for Jesus, I will. - Now, it seems you are answering your own request.
He lay down his life for me, what can I do for Him?
- I thought you wanted to do something to turn mankind from the darkside or be the voice for Jesus.
I would look over that last paragraph, and change this from script to prose, or fix the formatting to one of a script.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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A very sarcastic read from you. I will look at it, it is a letter. Your review is the only negative one I have received.
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I am sorry if it felt sarcastic and negative. I only intended to aid a fellow writer by being honest, and not just giving fluff and taking her money like so, so many members now do. It breaks my heart what this site has become after being on it since 2006.
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Thank you for returning my comments. I have changed the letter to God. Yes, the site has become less than when we joined. Sorry for being angry. K XX
Comment from Susan Newell
Kay,
Your beautiful letter represents a prayer that each of us should be saying each day. I thunk he has blessed you with the writing ability to spread His words of peace and appreciation for all He has given us. Very nice.
Sue
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Kay,
Your beautiful letter represents a prayer that each of us should be saying each day. I thunk he has blessed you with the writing ability to spread His words of peace and appreciation for all He has given us. Very nice.
Sue
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Hello Sue, Thanks so much for reading and your kind words. K xx
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You are welcome.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful letter to a God who knows you as His faithful child. You acknowledge that you did not listen when you were young, but later recognized God as your Heavenly Father. I especially like that you asked what you could do to be a voice for Jesus, and thanked God for loving you. This letter demonstrates your sincerity. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful letter to a God who knows you as His faithful child. You acknowledge that you did not listen when you were young, but later recognized God as your Heavenly Father. I especially like that you asked what you could do to be a voice for Jesus, and thanked God for loving you. This letter demonstrates your sincerity. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Hello little flutterby, Thanks for reading and I appreciate your review. K xx