Honorable?
What is needed are honorable men and women..2 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Wow! I wish I had a six. This is a well-written rhyming acrostic. The rhyme scheme is on point. There are no places in this poem that seems forced. It is a relatable topic, and one that I agree with. The visual fits well to the text. However, the text is too small. There are many on this site who are older and will strain reading text this size. Please take this under consideration. Good luck in the contest. I would vote for this poem. Well-done!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Wow! I wish I had a six. This is a well-written rhyming acrostic. The rhyme scheme is on point. There are no places in this poem that seems forced. It is a relatable topic, and one that I agree with. The visual fits well to the text. However, the text is too small. There are many on this site who are older and will strain reading text this size. Please take this under consideration. Good luck in the contest. I would vote for this poem. Well-done!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I will take your suggestion and remember the text size. Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.
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You are welcome.
Comment from leather
You chose an appropriate illustration for your poem, which follows the acrostic format. It reads smoothly and rings true.
It is so sad that there are so few statements of character.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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You chose an appropriate illustration for your poem, which follows the acrostic format. It reads smoothly and rings true.
It is so sad that there are so few statements of character.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your read and your feedback. I cannot agree more that there are many in our politics that are truly selfish and care not for the people but only themselves.