High
Being in nature makes me feel...9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
You wrote so well that my spirit also soared with you. The imagery is very lyrical - breathtakingly so. Your poem is a sensory delight. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You wrote so well that my spirit also soared with you. The imagery is very lyrical - breathtakingly so. Your poem is a sensory delight. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
You make me want to be there. I can remember events like this, way back when I was a kid. I'd better not try it today or I probably wouldn't be able to get up. You hit on all the highlights of those, laying on the grass looking up at the clouds, moments.
Very soothing
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You make me want to be there. I can remember events like this, way back when I was a kid. I'd better not try it today or I probably wouldn't be able to get up. You hit on all the highlights of those, laying on the grass looking up at the clouds, moments.
Very soothing
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I love you nature poem. You use most of the senses with lyrical writing. I like how your emotions are heightened while viewing the beauty of nature. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I love you nature poem. You use most of the senses with lyrical writing. I like how your emotions are heightened while viewing the beauty of nature. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are nature based, beautiful, comforting, encouraging,
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the scene the author's words
paint throughout this poem. Nature is where I find God so this poem
conveys so well the beauty of creation. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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The author's words are nature based, beautiful, comforting, encouraging,
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the scene the author's words
paint throughout this poem. Nature is where I find God so this poem
conveys so well the beauty of creation. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderfully descriptive free write that took me to a magical place filled with nature's treasures, I enjoye the ride and wish you luck with the contest, one of the best entries so far, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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A wonderfully descriptive free write that took me to a magical place filled with nature's treasures, I enjoye the ride and wish you luck with the contest, one of the best entries so far, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem is beautiful and so well describes how good it feels to be outside on a summer day, beholding all the wonders that nature has provided. Our Creator surely had an eye for beauty.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Your poem is beautiful and so well describes how good it feels to be outside on a summer day, beholding all the wonders that nature has provided. Our Creator surely had an eye for beauty.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
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You are welcome
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-written free verse poem on nature. I enjoyed reading it. The font could be a tad larger. There are many older writers like me on this site. The visual selected fits well. The title High is okay, but with the descriptions of nature in this poem, I would call this poem "Natural High". I love the last line of your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a well-written free verse poem on nature. I enjoyed reading it. The font could be a tad larger. There are many older writers like me on this site. The visual selected fits well. The title High is okay, but with the descriptions of nature in this poem, I would call this poem "Natural High". I love the last line of your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I did have it in a bigger font. Due to space constraints, the bigger font broke up the poem in a way that I did not want it to be broken up. I used the biggest font that I could to achieve the effect I wanted.
Comment from mermaids
"My soul hitches a ride on the breeze gliding over the treetops" is a perfect line that makes the reader feel like she is floating in nature. Excellent free verse form that takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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"My soul hitches a ride on the breeze gliding over the treetops" is a perfect line that makes the reader feel like she is floating in nature. Excellent free verse form that takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a lovely piece - you've embraced the strengths of free verse, using it to control pace and rhythm. I love the alignments you make between nature and art. This was a very enjoyable read.
Mike
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely piece - you've embraced the strengths of free verse, using it to control pace and rhythm. I love the alignments you make between nature and art. This was a very enjoyable read.
Mike
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.