Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Excellent poem!!
The phraseology is suburb!!
The metre creates a ribbonlike cadence lacing through the carefully chosen words.
The sensory details construct a delicate bridge for the reader to cross and connect with the poet.
Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Excellent poem!!
The phraseology is suburb!!
The metre creates a ribbonlike cadence lacing through the carefully chosen words.
The sensory details construct a delicate bridge for the reader to cross and connect with the poet.
Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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K.L. Thank you very much for your review and comments.
Comment from Ulla
This is a wonderful poem indeed. You were inspired by the picture and that lead you to write a wonderful poem. I loved it. It is so very well written. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This is a wonderful poem indeed. You were inspired by the picture and that lead you to write a wonderful poem. I loved it. It is so very well written. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Ulla, thank you for your review and comments,.
Comment from Sanku
Sometimes dreaming impossible dreams can lead us astray ..The poem has a good message ,The refrains and rhymes adding more strength to the lines.Good presentation too.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Sometimes dreaming impossible dreams can lead us astray ..The poem has a good message ,The refrains and rhymes adding more strength to the lines.Good presentation too.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Sanku, Thank you!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed this complicated rhyming poem. I like the refrain and the overall message of following your dreams including the impossible ones. I did and it made all the difference in the world.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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you nailed this complicated rhyming poem. I like the refrain and the overall message of following your dreams including the impossible ones. I did and it made all the difference in the world.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Jake, thank you very much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love ekphrastic poem for the picture this challenge. You matched your poem and picture nicely.
This was nicely rhymed...didn't sound forced.
I like the presentation and picture of the dew drop, it was a delight to see.
I loved your ------
because it supplied information about ---- and the reason it was ----.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by This was nice
The picture of the ---- was a delight to see.
I loved your ------
because it supplied information about ---- and the reason it was ----.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis".- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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I love ekphrastic poem for the picture this challenge. You matched your poem and picture nicely.
This was nicely rhymed...didn't sound forced.
I like the presentation and picture of the dew drop, it was a delight to see.
I loved your ------
because it supplied information about ---- and the reason it was ----.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by This was nice
The picture of the ---- was a delight to see.
I loved your ------
because it supplied information about ---- and the reason it was ----.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis".- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a very well written tale of how easily our dreams, and disappointments can shape our lives, our hearts and our thought processes. Well told in this poetic format, JLR.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This is a very well written tale of how easily our dreams, and disappointments can shape our lives, our hearts and our thought processes. Well told in this poetic format, JLR.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you Judy!
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all have our dreams and things we aspire to and hope that our dreams come true. If the dreams are impossible then we can fantasise about a life we have no change of living and this can be destructive, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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We all have our dreams and things we aspire to and hope that our dreams come true. If the dreams are impossible then we can fantasise about a life we have no change of living and this can be destructive, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks Dolly, I trust your summer is going great!
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Just perfect x
Comment from Reese Turner
I believe that your soft, lovely poem warns of getting carried away with one's fantasies as they will surely frustrate by never becoming realities. I have known that truth in love, in career and in golf. Fortunately, at age 74, too much hurts to think about anything else!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I believe that your soft, lovely poem warns of getting carried away with one's fantasies as they will surely frustrate by never becoming realities. I have known that truth in love, in career and in golf. Fortunately, at age 74, too much hurts to think about anything else!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Reese, I can agree I use a rescue club much more frequently with my age. 😒😒
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Ah, yes... The old foot wedge keeps my handicap barely below 20.
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I prefer my foot wedge; helps keep my handicap fractionally below 20.
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting post, and quite complex with the domino format. I wondered if the last stanza's lines 2 and 3 are permitted to be the same words as lines 1 and 4 of the first? Otherwise, I found it developed the theme well, with dreams and potential nightmares interwoven.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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An interesting post, and quite complex with the domino format. I wondered if the last stanza's lines 2 and 3 are permitted to be the same words as lines 1 and 4 of the first? Otherwise, I found it developed the theme well, with dreams and potential nightmares interwoven.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Hi Wendy, I took poetic liberty on this opportunity to merge the lines as they worked well for the fourth line in the stanza as the twist to the narrative.
Comment from Raul1
I see that you wrote of some things are impossible to come true but sometimes the impossible dream becomes possible. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I see that you wrote of some things are impossible to come true but sometimes the impossible dream becomes possible. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you.