A Cowboy's Lament
Make up your own music8 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This is a very well-written song. The lyrics are engaging and easy to follow along with. I could imagine this tune as a song playing on the radio. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This is a very well-written song. The lyrics are engaging and easy to follow along with. I could imagine this tune as a song playing on the radio. Excellent job!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks, that means a lot to me. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I thought I read the winning form moments ago but this rings the bell more for me for its simplicity, which is a given in most country songs, save for agoraphobia, but even that worked after I looked up what it was. Much too strenuous though for most C/W listeners.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I thought I read the winning form moments ago but this rings the bell more for me for its simplicity, which is a given in most country songs, save for agoraphobia, but even that worked after I looked up what it was. Much too strenuous though for most C/W listeners.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you this exceptional review, I'm so happy you liked it and I appreciate this very much. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a great song. It is the best I have read thus far. I like how you formatted it with headings. I was trying to imagine what the melody would be. The font size is large enough to be read. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. You have a great entry and probably my vote unless I find better. Great stuff!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is a great song. It is the best I have read thus far. I like how you formatted it with headings. I was trying to imagine what the melody would be. The font size is large enough to be read. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. You have a great entry and probably my vote unless I find better. Great stuff!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. I'm so glad you liked my song. :)
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You are welcome. To me you are the one to beat.
Comment from WriterHeather
Very nice! I'd love to hear some music behind these words. You have included many county tropes and It was really funny. Thank you so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Very nice! I'd love to hear some music behind these words. You have included many county tropes and It was really funny. Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
7/28/2922------5:59 pm
Well he got a dose full force of I don't cares. His world is spinning to fast to catch up fast. Soon he will be sleeping out doors. Singing his sad song of woe is me.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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7/28/2922------5:59 pm
Well he got a dose full force of I don't cares. His world is spinning to fast to catch up fast. Soon he will be sleeping out doors. Singing his sad song of woe is me.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Regina Elliott
Gosh, this poor cowboy so
down on his luck. I hope his
luck improves. I have heard
stories about some people
suffering misfortune after
winning the lottery. Then again, I'm taking the poem too seriously, lol! You've
penned this country song so
well. Blessings!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Gosh, this poor cowboy so
down on his luck. I hope his
luck improves. I have heard
stories about some people
suffering misfortune after
winning the lottery. Then again, I'm taking the poem too seriously, lol! You've
penned this country song so
well. Blessings!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This is such a wonderful review, thanks so much. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Perfect response to the prompt. What a great country song full of woe and lament. I loved the rye humor in some of the parts and the chorus was very effective. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Perfect response to the prompt. What a great country song full of woe and lament. I loved the rye humor in some of the parts and the chorus was very effective. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Sally Law
This is priceless! I loved this and especially, "my wife's done left me." So sorry about your horse. A serious song of lament with a little grin at the end.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This is priceless! I loved this and especially, "my wife's done left me." So sorry about your horse. A serious song of lament with a little grin at the end.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you, I always appreciate your opinion. :)