Willow
Willow in the breeze reminds of a waterfall.5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Harry,
I like this metaphoric view of the willow in your well used 20 syllables.
I like the sound of the wind through the branches to be a water fall of tears of the sad and weeping tree. Good personification.
Congrats on placing second in the conetest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Harry,
I like this metaphoric view of the willow in your well used 20 syllables.
I like the sound of the wind through the branches to be a water fall of tears of the sad and weeping tree. Good personification.
Congrats on placing second in the conetest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much for your read and your comments. Much appreciated.
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You are most kindly welcome, Harry.
Joan
Comment from mrsmajor
Picture, and words go so well together.
Your poem uses the 20 syllable poem requirement for the contest, and you used those words well...God luck in the contest, this is a very good entry..Thanks for sharing...I'm giving this one 6 stars, for both structure, and meaning..
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Picture, and words go so well together.
Your poem uses the 20 syllable poem requirement for the contest, and you used those words well...God luck in the contest, this is a very good entry..Thanks for sharing...I'm giving this one 6 stars, for both structure, and meaning..
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for the six stars and the encouraging review.
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You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Harry,
Darn good - has that Haiku feel! Do like your w-letter alliterations dripping throughout your poem. Phrasing most descriptive of the scene you painted in words.
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Harry,
Darn good - has that Haiku feel! Do like your w-letter alliterations dripping throughout your poem. Phrasing most descriptive of the scene you painted in words.
Mark
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Mark, for your encouraging review. Appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Willow, has the proper count and captures the sights and sounds of nature howling through the trees. Nice.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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This twenty-syllable poem, Willow, has the proper count and captures the sights and sounds of nature howling through the trees. Nice.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging feedback.
Comment from Susan Newell
Harry,
I like the imagery you have used in this twenty-word poem. I had imagined the visual (before reading), but not thought about the sound. Very nice poem.
Sue
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Harry,
I like the imagery you have used in this twenty-word poem. I had imagined the visual (before reading), but not thought about the sound. Very nice poem.
Sue
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Sue, for your read and encouraging feedback. When I was young, we had a willow in our backyard. I loved to lie beneath its branches and listen to leaves as they waved in the wind.